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Old 06-01-2008, 11:58 PM   #1
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why'd you leave me?
was it cause you lacked the power,
the power to understand my ways?

you told me you loved me,
wanted to be with me
i believed you to
till you left me cold and lonely
you locked me out
you made me shout!

you know i miss you
wanna kiss you again
just once
if you dont wanna
I understand

I am who i am
and thats all i'll ever be
guess you didn't realize who you were dealin' with

I hope that you live forever
so that we can be together again...

sorry if i sound like a pussy but my girl broke my heart and now all those sad songs make sense, this poems corny as heck but it relived the stress... thanks for readin!
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Old 06-02-2008, 12:02 AM   #2
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Good poem fo sho

Hope you feel better man, breakups can be difficult
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Old 06-02-2008, 03:48 AM   #3
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Yeah, corny it was but I completely know what you mean. My girlfriend broke up with me not that long ago and sometimes corny is the best way to explain how much it hurts. Surround yourself with some good buds (and bud ) and enjoy the rest of what life has to offer. You'll find someone else soon enough or maybe even work your differences with your ex. Either way there's plenty of other things life has to offer to enjoy despite the relationship.
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