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Old 06-02-2008, 04:52 AM   #1
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Default Poem:That One Girl

You are unique right to your very peak
Which is no small feat
When I feel down
My brain is on delay
And I am in denial
All I need is your smile
To brighten my day
I hate when I make you mad
Because when we don’t speak
I become weak and sad
If I feel empty and blue
It all disappears
As soon as you enter the room
You’re the perfect day I wish would come
And the most beautiful dream
I never want to wake up from
But never say never because make no mistake
You’re the one I want to hold forever and ever
You keep me out of harms way
And I want to be lying in your arms
On my dieing day
Out of anyone I’ve ever met
You’re the one I’ll miss
I would give anything for just one kiss
Or even a hug
Because you are my anti-drug
......you can read all of my poems so far on allpoetry.com my username is manning1816...this is probably really cheesy but its the truth...yeah she broke my heart...but we're still friends..let me know how it is...
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Old 06-02-2008, 01:57 PM   #2
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Nice poem, but it sounds like you're putting that pussy up on a pedestal.
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Old 06-02-2008, 05:59 PM   #3
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yup yup i did i did....but not anymore i dont like her...just good friends...i like someone else and she smokes ...which is a bonus...
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Old 06-02-2008, 10:31 PM   #4
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yup yup i did i did....but not anymore i dont like her...just good friends...i like someone else and she smokes ...which is a bonus...
Well that can work in your favor. Just don't put her up on a pedestal. :P
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Old 06-02-2008, 10:39 PM   #5
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Well that can work in your favor. Just don't put her up on a pedestal. :P
ill be sure not to...only thing is she doesnt like the off-topics that i use...
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Old 06-03-2008, 10:26 AM   #6
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ill be sure not to...only thing is she doesnt like the off-topics that i use...
Off topics like what?
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other off-topic drugs...i have used or tried...OC's....Coke.....Vicodin....ecstacy...n havent slammed H yet...(not bragging but if thats what u were askin...i answered)
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other off-topic drugs...i have used or tried...OC's....Coke.....Vicodin....ecstacy...n havent slammed H yet...(not bragging but if thats what u were askin...i answered)
Fair enough. I don't think you're bragging, its all cool.

Meh, she just needs to man up and stop worrying about that shit.
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Fair enough. I don't think you're bragging, its all cool.

Meh, she just needs to man up and stop worrying about that shit.
yeah lol...although its nice that she cares...same thing happened with the other girl i liked only it was worse...she checked my wallet everyday..and basically managed my money lol...one night i spent 50 bucks with some friends at applebee's...and she checked my wallet and automatically assumed i bought coke....so idk nice that people care..but they need to mind their own business if you ask me...not trying to be rude...but hey its MY life not theirs...
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yeah lol...although its nice that she cares...same thing happened with the other girl i liked only it was worse...she checked my wallet everyday..and basically managed my money lol...one night i spent 50 bucks with some friends at applebee's...and she checked my wallet and automatically assumed i bought coke....so idk nice that people care..but they need to mind their own business if you ask me...not trying to be rude...but hey its MY life not theirs...
You've gotta lay down the law. Not just in some put women in their place way. But with anybody for that matter. If you let people boss you around and walk all over you then thats what they're going to do.
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