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07-03-2008, 06:41 PM
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|  Slow Poison - new from Herbal Meditation "Slow Poison" Watching the weather Watching the weather change Chest heaving Observing the rising and falling Breath lingers Now rain falls on the garden The light disappears, returns again The sun is clear in rising and in setting Still breathing Stepping on white flowers by mistake Now a look to distant clouds The sun is peaking out Lying down in the shade of the tree Breath is freed from its ceaseless tides |
 
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07-05-2008, 05:21 PM
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| I may not fully understand it but you do paint a vivid picture with your words.
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07-07-2008, 01:54 AM
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| It is about the last moments, sights and sounds of a man dying from a slowly working poison. I wanted to give it a feeling of "staggering forward" in a way. Last edited by Herbal Meditation : 07-07-2008 at 04:16 AM. |
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