Raptor Jesus

This is a short piece of writting I had to do for english litterature 12, we had to write about a monster, we had just finished our part on beowulf and grendel. I got a good mark, and really enjoyed writting it, if you have any tips let me know


Gorag opened his mouth wide and unleashed a high pitched wail, like a wounded animal. His long red tongue lopped wildly as his cry carried across the desert plains of Tatooni, spittle flying from his ragged mouth and raining down on the parched sand like a toxic shower. Gorag was a monster, but as far as monsters go, he was relatively harmless. He relied on his horrific screams to frighten the townspeople away, for if they were to ever draw close enough to see him, they would quickly realize that he could do them no harm. His teeth were small, flat and irregularly spaced, making it difficult for him to eat anything with more consistency than pudding. There was little chance that he could tear through the flesh of a supple-skinned wench, let alone the pierce the armour of a mighty warrior.
Gorag lacked the intimidating height of the giant monsters to the north, and his spindly body and short stubby fingers were no match for the swords and arrows that humans brought down on the most powerful monsters in the land. Gorag in fact, was rather goofy looking, with a tiny sliver of a nose, unusually small ears, a strangely pronounced Adam’s apple, googly eyes, and virtually no body hair. Not only did this limit Gorag’s chances of ‘scoring with the ladies’ but his small ears and thin nose also resulted in a terrible sense of smell and hearing so bad he could barely hear his own inhuman cries.
Gorag was doomed to live a life of loneliness for no one would approach him while he screamed and while his horrible cries kept him safe from fatal arrows, they also meant that he would never find love or the monster companionship he longed for.
A gentle tear rolled down Gorag’s cheek falling to the sand below. He cried again, in anguish this time, his tears mixing with the spittle that flew off his vibrating tongue.

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Raptor Jesus

Mhmm, well its a bit of tongue and cheek humour...