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Old 06-07-2001, 09:16 PM   #21
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Now I'm gettin ruined,
Can't wait to see,
The next little ditty,
Put on here for me.

I just write down,
These words that you see,
They run out of my mouth,
On this screen to see.

This computer machine,
Makes it easy for me,
I can't stay at it for long,
I'm too high you see.

Just give me a minute,
And I'll come up with another,
The next one will be,
One you can show to your mother.

These words I put up,
For all ya to see,
I laugh at them all,
Even though there for thee.
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Old 06-07-2001, 11:38 PM   #22
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Got another one for ya,
Thought I'd run it on by,
It's about this habit,
Of gettin' real high.

Smokin a spliff,
Or maybe a bowl,
I'm now gettin' older,
And it's takin' it's toll.

I sit in my chair,
And puff right on out,
My head starts to nod,
And then I pass out.

Maybe I'm smokin' too much,
Maybe thats the key,
Maybe Dedbr's gettin' older,
Perhaps thats what I see.

Whatever it is,
And I'm not a lyin',
I try to get out of the chair,
But I'm too busy fryin'.

To the kitchen I go,
When I finally get up,
To get me some munchies,
And a taste of my sup.

Slow down you can say,
You're smokin' too much,
Put the pipe down,
It's not a crutch.

Perhaps you're right,
But then again no,
I need a good buzz,
Wherever I go.

So what do I do,
With this little rhyme,
I'll think of an answer,
Just give me some time.
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Old 06-08-2001, 12:13 AM   #23
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Wink stoner haiku

heres a little ditty that wont make you feel sh*tty...
you might even say its kind of witty, but if you dont like it you have my pity...

stoner smokes a joint
he then gets really f*cked up
he gets the munchies
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Old 06-08-2001, 08:28 AM   #24
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Friends will leave
and lovers will lie
people will move
and people might die

Laws will change
and views might too
i know it sounds strange
but you will too

websites will close
any surfer knows

but ganja will stay
for a million years and a day
ganja will remain
to keep us all sane


that one was bad
and i'll try better next time
but dont be sad
I'm getting better at rhyme

keep the words coming
and don't be slack
you're all great writers
don't hold back
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Old 06-08-2001, 08:42 AM   #25
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my temperature begins to rise
the veil is lifted from my eyes...
i smoke large quantities
with my g's
so whoever's got the herb, pass it please

here it goes:

Some nights sitting over my bong and thinking that my whole life
is gone wrong
i regret things i did and wish i did things i didnt
why am I here and where will I go?
whats wrong with me and why don't I know?
I must have a mental disorder
maybe i should forget america and cross the border
would that solve anything? I jump everytime I hear the phone ring
my brain is fxcked and half of it doesn't work
behind every corner I know thats where the devil lurks
sometimes i think im gonna snap, the emotions built up like a dam about to crack thats why i release it in my rap.
i gotta stay calm if I wanna stay legit
I wondered why life was so hard
after a joint, I realized if it wasn't so hard what would be the point?
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Old 06-08-2001, 11:53 AM   #26
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I was sittin' real cozy,
In front of my screen,
Doing my morning,
And cleaning a screen.

When a thought hit me,
Kinda like a rock,(ouch)
That theres something to see,
Here on Cheaptalk.

Were all havin' fun,
Writin' and readin this little bit,
Sittin in front of our computers,
Hopefully takin' a hit.

The herb brought us together,
And like a smoke ring,
We go round and round,
With these words that we sing.

KWhite I will probably,
Never get to meet,
Germany he says,real far away,
But he and I talk,'bout everyday.

It's on these boards,
That I meet you,my friends,
And I like tradin' words,
That don't need to offend.

I just went back thru,
All of your names,
Overdrive,Doritos man,the toker and rip,
diogenes,spliff,the head and KWhite,
Adikkal and Ganjx,oh what a sight.

We all come here to post,
On this here big board,
Now look what we've done,
We've made our own hoard.

I can't wait to see,
What happens next,
Goodgirl or Shifty,
Ya got any text?

Even Panama or rick,
C'mon guys,how 'bout it,
We need some more people,
To add to this bit.

So help us on out,
With a new word or rhyme,
You're welcome to jump in,
Just any old time.
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Old 06-08-2001, 02:42 PM   #27
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Talking I am not a poet!

So, I've been challenged?
This is nothing new,
Nice to see it in verse
instead of a harsh post or two.

I have been called many things
A b!tch, power hungry, pet princess and shrew
At least I can rest assured
That poet will not make the list too

I have enjoyed reading and have nothing to add
Just think of this while you smoke your grass
I like dedbr much more
When I don't have to edit his a**
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Old 06-08-2001, 03:31 PM   #28
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Glad you could join us.

" A poet, to speak in verse, is not the goal of a bard, to sing of that, which the souls traverse, of joy, and pain, sweet rhyme.
A poet is she, whose longings well high, under moonlit night as soft wionds blow, a poet is she, who weeps a tear, as evils its ugliness shows.
Come, take up the glove so gladly tossed, for others they read and learn, of all the things a soul can speak, and perhaps they too shall earn,
the courage to round base language, into something moulded and bright, to make another weep with words, at ones own inner fright.

Or perhaps to sing, of the simple joys, which move you to be.
One who speaks with humble voice, of that we all sdo see.
The saddest bud, is she not bloomed, poor wilted stem of green, happier far the male who tried, although his end certain seem.

like our herb, so are the words, at times they flow to overfill,
others they stutter, and slowly come, whether or not we will.
Welcome my friends, to this new place, one for which my heart grows bounds.
A poets corner, a bards cafe'
Where marijuana tempers the sounds"

Hi gg.

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Old 06-08-2001, 03:46 PM   #29
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Not one of my own, but it says something along the same lines beautifully (while what y'all started saying before the poems turned into poems about people writing poems about people writing poems - but keep 'em comin by all means, this is a trippy post!).

It's the start of Revelations by Iron Maiden:

"Oh, God of Earth and Alter
Bow down and hear our cry
Our Earthly rulers falter
Our people drift and die
The walls of gold entomb us
The swords of scorn divide
Take not thy thunder from us
Take away our pride"

It applies universally and it works good for weed too!

Oh and the song ends with:

"The one who will be king,
the watcher in the ring,
It is you
Oh-oh
It is you"
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Old 06-08-2001, 04:22 PM   #30
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Smile Hey, Dedbr!

I'm an excellent writer, but not in the poetry sense. Writing short stories is really more of my forte. But, I'm gonna give poetry another shot right here for all to see!

"marijuana is a drug!"
is what they all say
they tell us to stay away,
or else we'll have to pay
the cop who pulled me over,
gave me the cold sholder
he found my latest bong,
and now it's long gone
he sent me on my mary way,
I'll be more careful now, mmkay.

Wow! That turned out better than I expected!
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