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Old 02-22-2002, 12:43 PM   #1
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Here's a song I wrote last night. Ive got music to go with it. If it sucks, please tell me.

Someone comes and kills a bunch of your people
so then you go and kill a few of theirs
a thousand more people end up dieing
and twenty years later nobody cares

'cause when you talk about war
the politians want more
they want to open up the door
to the blood and the gore

but they dont understand
that they're killin a man
and his whole life
is in the palm of their hand
but re-election's comin' up
they gotta do what they can
to stay in there
and put more money in their hand

They say they're gonna rid the world of evil
and the people smile and think they're doin' good
but you know you cant put out a fire
when you just keep throwin' on the wood

so the boys go and die
and their mothers cry
the government could stop it
but they dont even try
sure its kind of risky but its good for the polls
another kid dies for a rich man's goals
but re-election's comin' up
they gotta do what they can
to stay in there
and put more money in their hand

Just turned 18 and just got out of high school
got a car and a job and everything's doing fine
he's got his whole life set out in front of him
but uncle sam's got something different in mind

cause we're all just a pawn in their evil game
everybody's different but to them its all the same
amother man is dead and nothing is gained......

and thats where I ran out of creative spirit.
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Old 02-22-2002, 04:11 PM   #2
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i like it and it made me think of Orwell's 1984

if you havent read it, i highly recommend it.
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Old 02-22-2002, 05:56 PM   #3
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OMG! Thats SO KOOL! OMG! It is also very true and sad. Stupid govm'nt
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Old 03-02-2002, 06:05 PM   #4
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Awesome....that relates alot to my song....how all the government tries to do is control. Awesome song man.
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