schwadood

heres another tune I'm working on. The music kind of sounds like a minor key country song. Its a work in prgress and is not done yet. Its still untitled as well.

Everyone's got their cross to bear
I carry this water up the stairs
I make it through the best I can
Just as good as any man

Everyone look out! The roof's caving in
And fades away under my skin
To show shooting stars across the sky
Falling very far from I

After the speeding comet
In the wake of the fiery trail
The candles flash and flicker
The cold wind begins to wail

If this water ws whiskey I'd sit right down
And drink and drink and drink till i fell down
On the stair between heaven and hell
Its a daily trip I know it well

Sometimes the weight trips me up
And I look into my broken cup
Its just water, I'm not drunk
I really think I've had enough

Sometimes the bucket gets heavy
Sometimes its way too much
Its the curse that i carry
Its my burden, its my crutch

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peace and much love

Leithreas

splendid

great song, do you got a score to go with it, yet?

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"I am the Alpha and the Omega," says the Lord God, "who is and who was and who is to come, the Almighty." --Revelation 1:8

Have a nice day!

Sabin2k

That's a great song.....The people here are so creative and i'm glad i've been here!anyway great song!

schwadood

Thanks guys. I'm not done with the music yet. I think i got a good verse, but i need a chorus. And i feel the song needs a point of contrast, just something completely different than the rest of it.