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12-01-2005, 01:06 AM
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|  freakin sweet tc i just read ur whole story in about an hour or so, takign breaks on an off, but i have to say its is very original and great, full of suspense, plz writes us another sometime soon, peace |
 
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12-01-2005, 09:42 PM
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|  i too read it all in one go because i only found it tonight one thing, when using inverted commas for direct speech, theres no need to put each sentence in inverted commas. put them at the start and end of whatever that person has to say. example "Just look at all those white hairs I've got." "That's very interesting Dan K, mind awfully if I smoke you?" respect to you cleric
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12-03-2005, 12:54 AM
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| Hey, TC if your still around and happen to read this, thats a sick story. If you ever get it published, let me know, so I can buy it  For anyone else who hasn't read it and is considering doing so, I would HIGHly suggest reading it. Again TC, thanks for contributing your creativiity to these fourms later
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12-03-2005, 02:58 AM
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| that was great, i liked it alot. peace |
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12-03-2005, 03:41 AM
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| Sweet. I read it all in one shot and it took me quite a while but it was while worth it! That story was captivating and i just had to read it all. Mad respect to you cleric, you have a gift of writing. keep it comming keep tokin peace
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