A Short Description: Insecurity

Nickel · 04-25-2002, 04:48 AM

The high pitched noise of the passing cars
shoot like the stars over my head.
The chill-moist air dampens my lungs
and my exhale falls to the ground
denser than before.
I blink and blink and blink.
My eyelids soon become saturated
and spill over to my cheeks.
This empty and scared void that had invaded my soul
tilts it's head back in confidence -
lifts it's fists towards its shoulders
and lets go a mind shattering vocal blast.
The void rocks back and forth under the control of laugher
saying, "An easy accomplishment I must admit."

potheadreturns2 · 04-26-2002, 04:44 AM

hehe, good poem/description. I liked it. God knows it was good, a little on the short side but I suppose you already knew that! Well anyway man, good work, keep it up I want to see more!

04-25-2002, 04:48 AM	#1
Nickel New Member Join Date: Jan 2001 Posts: 75 Grams: 2,005.50 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	A Short Description: Insecurity The high pitched noise of the passing cars shoot like the stars over my head. The chill-moist air dampens my lungs and my exhale falls to the ground denser than before. I blink and blink and blink. My eyelids soon become saturated and spill over to my cheeks. This empty and scared void that had invaded my soul tilts it's head back in confidence - lifts it's fists towards its shoulders and lets go a mind shattering vocal blast. The void rocks back and forth under the control of laugher saying, "An easy accomplishment I must admit."

04-26-2002, 04:44 AM	#2
potheadreturns2 Jr. Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Posts: 472 Grams: 2,416.20 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	hehe, good poem/description. I liked it. God knows it was good, a little on the short side but I suppose you already knew that! Well anyway man, good work, keep it up I want to see more! __________________ 2

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