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Old 06-19-2002, 07:50 AM   #1
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Default Lyrics: Running Lonely

I'm too ****ing stoned for any of your ****,
I'm too ****ing stoned for your world.
I don't care what you think,
I don't care what you say,
The memories? Don't matter.
That *****? **** it, you have her.

Screaming silent, running lonely,
Along a knife edge scared to fall,
Eyes squeezed shut, make a fist,
Bloodied head against the wall.

My life in a can you have stomped down flat,
Punctured, useless, an indescribable mess.
Fears and restrictions; they grab at my chest.
I hate you, i hate it, i hate her, i hate all.
Why are you forever presenting a wall,
Pruning my growth, steming my tide,
Crafting a shell in which i must hide.

Stirring cold I breathe the air,
Of tainted promise that lingers here,
You lie, I hate it, won’t take it,
Can’t take it, you fake it, I’ll break it.

**** it all says the herb speak deep in my mind,
No longer will i stay huddled inside,
I'll scorn you and mock you, push you aside,
Not mourn you, nor have concern for rules to abide.
The pain, i take it, feel you clawing my soul,
The perfect beauty of darkness has formed a hole,
But i'll fill it with contempt, with anger, with shame,
The world full of promise just turned me away.
Through bloodshot eyes the people look,
The image defines,
A brutally mishapen...
Abused...
Human life.
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Old 06-19-2002, 07:52 AM   #2
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That was pretty profane wasn't it. I'm still pretty new here so i'm not sure exactly what the limits are. Hope i didn't cross them too far.
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Old 06-19-2002, 10:52 PM   #3
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Good show man! I especially liked the middle section:
My life in a can you have stomped down flat,
Punctured, useless, an indescribable mess.
Fears and restrictions; they grab at my chest.
I hate you, i hate it, i hate her, i hate all.
Why are you forever presenting a wall,
Pruning my growth, steming my tide,
Crafting a shell in which i must hide.

Very poetic, and it rhymed! That's always a plus in my eyes.
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