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imported_CaitiQ · 07-02-2002, 12:32 AM

Audacious colors blind the eye.
All of life’s enigmatic things
Meaning of all, no one knows why.

Urges of weightlessness, able to fly
Encompassed by an enduring ring
Audacious colors blind the eye.

Generic sentiments cause a laugh and cry
Abrupt as a doorbell: buzz, ding
Meaning of all, no one knows why.

Caught in a trap telling a lie
Of a whimsical castle where everyone sings
Audacious colors blind the eye.

Last few moments are dark and dry
Intense, short and unnervingly serene
Meaning of all, no one knows why.

No way to live, no way to die
Only in nightmares, never in dreams
Audacious colors blind the eye
Meaning of all, no one knows why.

TheCleric · 07-02-2002, 12:36 AM

Im not the best person to try and disect poetry but is it by chance a statement about religion? Religion, death and what happens after we die?

Cleric

imported_CaitiQ · 07-02-2002, 12:54 AM

Obviously, it does have to do with death but, no, it is not about religion. I can see where you are coming from though. Atleast you attempted to figure it out, most people that I have showed it to gave up or had no idea.

vivrantv · 07-08-2002, 04:05 AM

CaitiQ, are you maybe trying to say something about how you feel when you are high? Like how you understand things about the world but can never put them into words. Like maybe theyre better expressed as "audacious colors". And if you're not talking about smoking and the things you realize there, are you talking about how theres too much complexity to be able to answer and justify the world's clockwork?

Freakish · 07-08-2002, 07:37 AM

yeah i was going to say.... Its like trying to describe what it feels like to get high....maybe.

imported_CaitiQ · 07-08-2002, 04:40 PM

I may as well just explain it because I don't think anyone will see what it is really about. All the guesses are very good, but my poem is about drinking and driving. In the beginning, you feel you can do anything and that everything is fine. Obviously, when a person is drunk they feel that nothing will ever happen to them. In the end, it describes either driving or getting into the car with an intoxicated driver. That is the gist of it and after reading it again, you will be able to see the meaning of everything.

07-02-2002, 12:32 AM	#1
imported_CaitiQ New Member Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 90 Grams: 428.45 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Untitled poem, do you know the meaning? Audacious colors blind the eye. All of life’s enigmatic things Meaning of all, no one knows why. Urges of weightlessness, able to fly Encompassed by an enduring ring Audacious colors blind the eye. Generic sentiments cause a laugh and cry Abrupt as a doorbell: buzz, ding Meaning of all, no one knows why. Caught in a trap telling a lie Of a whimsical castle where everyone sings Audacious colors blind the eye. Last few moments are dark and dry Intense, short and unnervingly serene Meaning of all, no one knows why. No way to live, no way to die Only in nightmares, never in dreams Audacious colors blind the eye Meaning of all, no one knows why.

07-08-2002, 07:37 AM	#5
Freakish Jr. Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Posts: 546 Grams: 466.85 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	yeah i was going to say.... Its like trying to describe what it feels like to get high....maybe. __________________ All of the above it true...except for the lies

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07-02-2002, 12:36 AM	#2
TheCleric Novice Healer Join Date: Oct 2000 Posts: 2,406 Grams: 2,188.90 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Im not the best person to try and disect poetry but is it by chance a statement about religion? Religion, death and what happens after we die? Cleric

07-02-2002, 12:54 AM	#3
imported_CaitiQ New Member Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 90 Grams: 428.45 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Obviously, it does have to do with death but, no, it is not about religion. I can see where you are coming from though. Atleast you attempted to figure it out, most people that I have showed it to gave up or had no idea.

07-08-2002, 04:05 AM	#4
vivrantv Jr. Member Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 173 Grams: 454.60 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	CaitiQ, are you maybe trying to say something about how you feel when you are high? Like how you understand things about the world but can never put them into words. Like maybe theyre better expressed as "audacious colors". And if you're not talking about smoking and the things you realize there, are you talking about how theres too much complexity to be able to answer and justify the world's clockwork?

07-08-2002, 04:40 PM	#6
imported_CaitiQ New Member Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 90 Grams: 428.45 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	I may as well just explain it because I don't think anyone will see what it is really about. All the guesses are very good, but my poem is about drinking and driving. In the beginning, you feel you can do anything and that everything is fine. Obviously, when a person is drunk they feel that nothing will ever happen to them. In the end, it describes either driving or getting into the car with an intoxicated driver. That is the gist of it and after reading it again, you will be able to see the meaning of everything.

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