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Old 07-03-2002, 09:26 PM   #1
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Default Tha Storms Comin'

off in the horizon - a dark storm approachin',
everybody reachin' for they poncho's an raincoats and...
and bibles - but **** that like beyonce im'a survivor...
grab the apostle paul by the collar...
gimme my money ma****a - that you done took from my kin folk,
for them years they shed blood sweat an tears in the back row...
there aint no ma****in' heaven for me,
cuz i like to cause pain rap mame an scheme...
i make cheese cuz i got to...
but everythings gonna change with the alignment of the moon...
the end is soon - an the mayans saw it comin',
prehistoric playaz leave you drippin' down the steps of blood.
200 religeons - everybody prays to somethin'...
scared to death cuz the antichrist is comin'...
nastradamas said he'd be of middle eastern decent.
but the evil is U.S.... the enemy within...
they look pretty on tv - but they got snakeskin...
___________

see me as an outkast - an undesirable person...
cuz you naive - and i expect the worst ****....
bloody virgin's stench - on my crotch area...
she said no cuz she was not prepared for tha...
sudden end of a semi innocent world...
said jesus was the man she was waiting for...
but my basic instincts - told me to **** her...
like in primitive times - lift the raw hide skirt up...
***** might get clubbed up - im like a new school caveman...
the ultimate predator that i am... man...
a plague upon earth...
when we aint busy destroyin' the planet, we burnin' down the ****in' church.
its gone get worse with these jokers callin' the shots,
dont kno **** about government - just like his pops...
gonna get us in some **** that we cant get out of...
cuz theres too many ma****in' muslims.
____________

we got school shootings - ma****as losin' they ****...
****in arabs stealin' planes crashin' into buildin's...
wheres john lennon when you need him? shot in the head...
cuz there aint no love and there never has been...
an those that speak on it put theirselfs at risk...
the men in black play no games - **** will smith.
many came before me - aint changed **** yet...
words can get you killed - ask abe lincoln...
cant rock the boat - vote - or be differant...
cuz they got the game locked up like bill gates did...
money is power - its got many faces...
slave owners that x'd out - generations...
and i'm related - my skin i cant erase it...
somewhere down the line - my people stole the nation.
my cup of history - is sour when you taste it...
i just need a 5th of glenmore gin - with no chaser.
____________

i see my people an they doin they thing...
ignorant to how fast this ****s gonna change...
careless is how we livin' / on the brink of extinction...
just tell us where the **** we go when we die.
dont need your weak excuses / dont touch my constitution...
church and state is far from one and the same.
hate fills my body / i go into a rage...
undercover communists with a democratic face.
cant do **** about it but sit here and numb my brain.
_____________

the storms comin'..........
walkin' in the shoes of a dead man... with no plan...
they try to shut me up but i cant man....
im'a put it in the open....

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you can listen to the audio here:
www.mp3.com/criminalz
"Tha Storms Comin" -KC, Ca$hRoll Recordz
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Old 07-04-2002, 02:50 AM   #2
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That sucks.

Sorry but rap isint music, its drums with ****talkers for vocals
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Old 07-04-2002, 05:01 AM   #3
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That sucks.

Sorry but rap isint music, its drums with ****talkers for vocals
man you dont know ****...
those lyrics right there are tight...


i could write circles around you in any form.
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Old 07-04-2002, 09:08 AM   #4
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This is a creative writing forum.

If you do not want criticism do not post.

If you do criticize...do it politely.

Otherwise.

Take it elsewhere.
Kelly
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Old 07-08-2002, 07:32 PM   #5
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Sorry, but i dont consider rap music. Metal IS music.

Im not saying "Rap sucks, you should listen to more metal" I could care less about the music people listen to, but still, My religon is metal, and Rap music is satan to me
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Old 07-08-2002, 10:59 PM   #6
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well spliffted....

' i see my people an they doin they thing...
ignorant to how fast this ****s gonna change...
careless is how we livin' / on the brink of extinction...
just tell us where the **** we go when we die.
dont need your weak excuses / dont touch my constitution...
church and state is far from one and the same.
hate fills my body / i go into a rage...
undercover communists with a democratic face.
cant do **** about it but sit here and numb my brain.
_____________

the storms comin'..........
walkin' in the shoes of a dead man... with no plan...
they try to shut me up but i cant man....
im'a put it in the open....'

respect 2 u.....i feel your words...i luv rap...
queeny
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