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Old 07-24-2002, 04:55 AM   #1
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I wrote a poem that I'd like to share. Here it is.

In my greatest of calms
An otherwise noisy city is so serene.
I wish that more often,
This inner peace can be seen.

Today I stand outside,
A tremerous rain, beating my palms,
But it feels like a warm shower,
In my greatest of calms.
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my heart rapid rushes
death before my eyes
oh why did I trust this
my reactions are repeated
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Old 07-24-2002, 07:59 AM   #2
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I like it.
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Old 07-24-2002, 03:02 PM   #3
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Nice ending too, sums it up quite nicely.
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Old 07-25-2002, 02:25 AM   #4
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I just realized, this poem could totally be interpreted as being high!! (no intention to do that)
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