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Old 08-15-2002, 06:46 AM   #1
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Default Poem: The talk

I wrote this poem a few nights ago because I didn't know what else to do with all my thoughts. I'm still waiting for a follow-up.

Come here.
Can’t it wait?
Get off the phone.
I’ll call you back.
Something isn’t right.
What?
I’m late.
Oh no.
I’m afraid so.
You’re not…
I don’t know.
How could this happen?
How can you ask that?
I’m sorry, I’m just…
You’re just what?
What can we do?
I don’t know.
When will we know for sure?
A few days.

Say something.

Say anything.
…I…
You what?
…I…
Please say something.
I love you.
I love you too.
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Old 08-15-2002, 08:23 AM   #2
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Nice poem, it reads very smoothly.
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Old 08-20-2002, 02:25 PM   #3
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Default oh man,

I've had that kind of conversation several times. I feel for you, and am wishing the best. If you want to talk to someone who might understand, I'm here.

Plaese post your follow up, I'm interested.
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Old 08-20-2002, 05:53 PM   #4
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I wish I could post a follow-up. We are supposed to know either today or tomorrow.
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Old 08-20-2002, 06:13 PM   #5
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Yes those conversations are quite scary indeed. Nice poem though. Keep us posted man and try and calm down as much as humanly possible. Sometimes its just late for no reason other than to scare the bejesus out of you, hope that this is one of those times.

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Old 08-20-2002, 06:18 PM   #6
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Dude that was real nice, and artsy like
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Old 08-21-2002, 06:04 PM   #7
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dude, i just went through that exact thing not more than a few weeks ago. somehow everything turned out for the better. she started and we learned a really valuable lesson. but remember, no matter how it turns out, it always turns out right...dont let go.
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Old 08-22-2002, 06:42 AM   #8
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The home test came up negative, but some complications have led us to be worried. She has an appointment with her doctor tomorrow. Cross you fingers for me.
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Old 08-22-2002, 06:47 AM   #9
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Good luck ross.
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Good luck, man... hope things go as you'd like them to.


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