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imported_Ilúvatar · 10-28-2002, 09:34 PM

all the years ahead
all the years laid waste

all the chances given to me
all my choices taken away

all the years of shame
all the wrongful blames

all my sleepless nights
all my useless days

all my dreams and hopes
all of them failed me

all my friendships and loves
all of them fake and worthless

all my teachers and mentors
all of them judgmental and dead to me

i wish i was happy
i wish it all made sense

but i will never be
and it never will

so i’m better off dead

Blunted420Life · 10-28-2002, 09:36 PM

but art is individually unique

Super Woman · 10-28-2002, 10:08 PM

How can you call someone elses work crappy?!

Ross · 10-28-2002, 10:12 PM

It's one thing to give constructive criticism. It is another thing to belittle someone's work just for the sake of belittling it. Moreover, it doesn't matter how good the poetry is, the act of writing it is usually the most important part in dealing with emotions.

Blunted420Life · 10-28-2002, 10:23 PM

i showed my respect

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art is individually unique

vaya · 10-29-2002, 01:17 AM

You haven't seen him contribute anything to this forum lately, have you?

Anyhow, I hope all is well. Please, do not kill yourself, as you've suggested by the last line. I've been there, but now that I have emerged, my life has taken a new meaning to it.

And on top of everything, continue to write! I love reading this forum, it's one of my very favorites.

dbighead · 10-29-2002, 01:26 AM

silent-bob,

Actually I think it is pretty good.
I like how it starts out good and then contradicts itself.
Good work, keep it up.

It would probably make a good song.

imported_Ilúvatar · 10-29-2002, 03:05 AM

i am better, i'm basicly bi-polar and this was one of my bad states. and it was through a dry spell, i find that weed is the best antidepressive, so i was in a very bad mood.

but thanks to mj i'm back on tob of things and seeing things a lot better!

jaman · 10-29-2002, 05:38 AM

For it was only through her eyes that I could see thy true self

imported_Ilúvatar · 10-29-2002, 05:49 AM

uhhh...it may be because i am very very high(and probably is) but huh?

10-28-2002, 09:34 PM	#1
imported_Ilúvatar Where is my mind... Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 1,732 Grams: 2,107.45 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	a poem i wrote in a very depressive state all the years ahead all the years laid waste all the chances given to me all my choices taken away all the years of shame all the wrongful blames all my sleepless nights all my useless days all my dreams and hopes all of them failed me all my friendships and loves all of them fake and worthless all my teachers and mentors all of them judgmental and dead to me i wish i was happy i wish it all made sense but i will never be and it never will so i’m better off dead __________________ I've got the smell of a local man, who's got the loneliest feeling.

10-28-2002, 09:36 PM	#2
Blunted420Life Banned Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 51 Grams: 26.70 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	crappy but art is individually unique

10-28-2002, 10:08 PM	#3
Super Woman Jr. Member Join Date: Oct 2000 Posts: 889 Grams: 967.30 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	How can you call someone elses work crappy?! __________________ Down the rabbit hole and through the talking doors lies a world where vibrant colors merge into shapes of fantacy, and music radiates from flowers.

10-29-2002, 01:17 AM	#6
vaya Activist Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 1,760 Grams: 3,026.00 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Pay no attention to him... You haven't seen him contribute anything to this forum lately, have you? Anyhow, I hope all is well. Please, do not kill yourself, as you've suggested by the last line. I've been there, but now that I have emerged, my life has taken a new meaning to it. And on top of everything, continue to write! I love reading this forum, it's one of my very favorites. __________________ I Wish For Peace Between The Races Someday We Shall All Be One Coming To The Surface There's Fire All Around But This Is An Illusion

10-29-2002, 01:26 AM	#7
dbighead Jr. Member Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 577 Grams: 893.95 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	silent-bob, Actually I think it is pretty good. I like how it starts out good and then contradicts itself. Good work, keep it up. It would probably make a good song. __________________ "It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it." -Aristotle

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10-28-2002, 10:12 PM	#4
Ross Seasoned Activist Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 1,231 Grams: 2,939.15 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	It's one thing to give constructive criticism. It is another thing to belittle someone's work just for the sake of belittling it. Moreover, it doesn't matter how good the poetry is, the act of writing it is usually the most important part in dealing with emotions.

10-29-2002, 03:05 AM	#8
imported_Ilúvatar Where is my mind... Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 1,732 Grams: 2,107.45 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	thanks for the support! i am better, i'm basicly bi-polar and this was one of my bad states. and it was through a dry spell, i find that weed is the best antidepressive, so i was in a very bad mood. but thanks to mj i'm back on tob of things and seeing things a lot better!

10-29-2002, 05:38 AM	#9
jaman Marijuana Master Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 1,527 Grams: 3,181.15 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	poetry For it was only through her eyes that I could see thy true self

10-29-2002, 05:49 AM	#10
imported_Ilúvatar Where is my mind... Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 1,732 Grams: 2,107.45 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	... uhhh...it may be because i am very very high(and probably is) but huh?

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