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Old 12-09-2002, 02:19 PM   #1
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Blind drunk, he's 15 and on a roll,
He got caught by a teacher larkin around out school.
Stumbles into the classrom, coughs and throws up,
3 pills distinguishable through the blood.

His liver's ****ed, he's trippin,
He sits silent, pupils so stretched, they're close to ripping.
His jaw's practically hangin between his knees,
He got dumped last night, five months and now this!?

He's not feelin to good now, he's half dead,
Suicidal thoughts keep skimming through his head.
His knees buckle and he passes out, distant shouts screamin 'he's dead',
It goes slow, he gags and he wakes up in hospital bed.

He's gone; discharged and driven off without retort,
There's blood at his nostrils from all the (off topic substance) that he snort.
The scars on his shoulders remind him not to go home,
Loaded with drugs and money, he sets off on his own.

Nothing to lose.

She run away once, the energy she had then's left her.
It was different then, it was only a hope, but there was a dream of something better.
Now she's withered, scagged up and mentally torn,
She sits at some ****'s flat with a needle hangin out her arm.

She walks out, the door shuts behind,
She's floating now, not conscious enough to keep time.
****, she wakes up, all recollection of the night gone,
She didn't even get her last customers done.

It's all gone, family shunned a life-time ago,
Ah well, there's was no warmth there I suppose.
Some get on with families and others don't,
Most wish for something normal like the next poor ****.

She stands up, no place to go, no person to turn to,
Now that's a ****in harsh fact for a 14 year old ho.
She feels it racin now, chasin her through the corners of her mind,
That numb, dead feeling; that's suicide.

Nothing to lose
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Old 12-09-2002, 03:15 PM   #2
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Nice lyrics, but what sorta beat would go to it? I keep thinking that it would go with Eminem's "Lose yourself" cuz of the way everything rhymes. Nice job tho!
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Old 12-09-2002, 08:03 PM   #3
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I keep thinking that it would go with Eminem's "Lose yourself" cuz of the way everything rhymes. Nice job tho!
Any other guesses?
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