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Old 01-14-2003, 04:37 AM   #1
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Cool My Untitled Short Poems

These are some short poems, or collections of thought, that I have written about a year ago, stoned listening to music.


First Poem

Total freedom would be nice,
But then so is a bag of ice.
We will all have to pay the price
Because they roll the dice.



Second Poem

The beginning is never ending.
Time can help the mending.
The adventure has been bizarre.
I hope they don't know where we are.



Third Poem

The cool breeze returned to me,
After it's long journey through sea.
It was the right time to return,
The sun was frying our brains.
The coolness had an impact of three trains.
It seems I always run out of room for lyrics,
So get some deer ticks.



Fourth Poem

No distractions, just let the rays flow.
Why can't we let all things grow?



Fifth Poem

The times are passing us by,
Sometimes all you can do is cry
As this unexplained journey passes
Each of us by.

We are lost and try to find a way.
Uncertainity of this destiny can be misery.
The limits can be broken,
go past the sky.
Look beyond the gates.
Step inside another world, a world untold.
Perfect harmony lies ahead, is what I said.
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Old 01-14-2003, 02:30 PM   #2
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thank's Soybomb those are very nice !
And I personally like the fifth one the best , It's more of a poem and I like the content.

The others are more like rimes, then poems .

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