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Old 04-29-2003, 01:09 AM   #1
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Default what do you think?

heres a poem from a while back...its an old one, but i think it says a lot...

*Destruction*

Sitting in a pool of blood
Bodies crushed, bodies dead
No one wanted to pay attention to my cries, my bloody cries for help
So i damn all their souls to Hell
I stomped the life right out of them
All the world is my dungeon
Torturing their souls and having fun
Meathooks implanted in the heads
Of everyone i have ever met
God is next, He has no chance
Bow down, he will, and kiss my feet
Or suffer the others' fates
But in a more gruesome way
Next comes the Devil
Cut off his wings with a sickle
No more will he be in control down there
I will take over and rule the world
But you are the first on my list
I'll use blunt butcher knives and pointed sticks
DIE ***** DIE!!
Watch for my shadow over the world when i come to kill you

..by K.E.K.
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Old 04-29-2003, 01:46 AM   #2
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Default DAMN...

Methinks you need to smoke some more green!

Nice writing, however. The last line nicely portrays some kind of mystic eeriness to your coming to kill this person.
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Old 04-29-2003, 02:34 AM   #3
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Yea..sounds creepy..im lovin' it
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Old 04-29-2003, 03:03 AM   #4
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A bit demented I might add
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