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| you didn't listen you didn't care i gave up hope just shut on down let it pass just let it go the past would soon me nothing more than just a thing, that i had done while bored, alone, without a tongue showing promise, channelled wrong writing down a morose song of trick, of game, of fun gone wrong never listened, just heard it wrong there must be something hidden here something deep inside his head feeling pain or problem deep that from us he felt to keep didn't stop to listen though of all the things which he had thought while sitting there upon a chair talking to his friend of short just a joke, a game, a hiding jest not knowing what this fun had brought to hide and dart and seek and play this game was not accepted there. --------------- interpert this however you please. i just needed to get it down somewhere. edit: i welcome feedback..
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