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Old 06-03-2003, 08:37 PM   #1
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Default ...screaming Chromium Blue

Like chromium,
You scream when I bend you.
Soft flesh of metal, the cold surface; your sinew.
It pains my sallow skin to see into you,
Your seeringly iced surface;
Chromium blue.

Stringed my vitality through and through,
Aged not the depiction, but set it in you.
A web of forced thoughts covering the truth,
Agonisingly painted a chromium blue.

Remembering rights as they were then,
Infinitely changing the memoirs penned.
Set into a colour that best reflects you,
Screaming as it bends, a chromium blue.

References to a presence that lurks in mind,
Painted to the lessons it teaches over time.
But unlike time, it can bend to you,
Screamed as it did; mine, chromium blue.

Tense takes time to work into one's hand,
Is there a current moment to mark the trend?
This is what cained me as I looked for you,
The colours ever-changing, in a world of chromium blue.

It took one name to inspire this; you know who you are, cheers.

*not sure if that should be an osmium scream or a chromium scream.
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Old 06-11-2003, 01:12 AM   #2
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nice poem man.

didn't somebody on here have chromium blue as a name? did he piss you off
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Old 06-15-2003, 08:37 PM   #3
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nice poem man.

didn't somebody on here have chromium blue as a name? did he piss you off
Haha!! I hope not!! Chromium Blue has a very emotional vibe that is given off when it is said... I dont know what it is about it but some series of words will cause the mind to mix emotions. Although it has another "hidden" meaning, chromium blue is my favorite color... Im glad that I could help spark a thought process. Keep it flowing...
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Old 06-27-2003, 04:48 AM   #4
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very tasty, and not pretty words devoid of meaning either, so bravo to you! these really come off as lyrics, maybe you should put them to music. make sure there are kazoos. kazoos kick ass
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