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BrAiNdAmAgEd · 06-21-2003, 05:51 PM

Walking in shadowtime,
losing my mind,
everythings changing now,
and im left behind..
chewing on glass,
and razors of cheese,
burning my throat,
and all in between.
The wind screams hipocracy
yelling profanities and lies,
telling them all
to curl up and die.
My eyes glaze over
my reflexes relax,
All my bones are melting
and please leave the giraffe.

Devio · 06-21-2003, 05:56 PM

I like the title alot but the poem makes no sense.

Devio · 06-21-2003, 05:56 PM

I like the title alot but the poem makes no sense.

imported_tychristine420 · 06-21-2003, 10:59 PM

im only gonna say this once... that was a cool poem, and i bet you just wanted to post something, so i think that that was much better than something like uhhh, what kind of weed do you think this is?

know i am done
but before i push submit reply
i must roll a joint
and get real high... nah, not really, i might spark a bowl tho

Frylock · 06-22-2003, 12:50 AM

I think the poem is cool, except for the giraffe part at the end, it just kind of threw it off.

DonnieDanko · 06-22-2003, 04:03 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Frylock
I think the poem is cool, except for the giraffe part at the end, it just kind of threw it off.

agreed.

beats · 06-22-2003, 06:12 AM

The cheese thing gave it that "Cheeeese" kinda feel, but it does make it flow perfectly, but the Giraffe part made sense, at least to me it did.

Awesome

Basically Baked · 06-22-2003, 04:52 PM

Shadowtimes the time when there are a lot of shadow but still alot of light. You can see perfectly but there are shadows everywhere.

BrAiNdAmAgEd · 06-22-2003, 07:38 PM

This poem made a lot of sense to me when i was stoned...The giraffe symbolizes my freedom, and the the wind symbolizes outter influences trying to twist and distort people. And the Glass and cheese razors represent the mulled over half truths of our world...

Frylock · 06-22-2003, 08:14 PM

I see, that's cool braindamaged, good poem.

06-21-2003, 05:51 PM	#1
BrAiNdAmAgEd Jr. Member Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 244 Grams: 857.80 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Walking in shadowtime Walking in shadowtime, losing my mind, everythings changing now, and im left behind.. chewing on glass, and razors of cheese, burning my throat, and all in between. The wind screams hipocracy yelling profanities and lies, telling them all to curl up and die. My eyes glaze over my reflexes relax, All my bones are melting and please leave the giraffe.

06-22-2003, 06:12 AM	#7
beats Drop-In Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 2,353 Grams: 2,735.70 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	The cheese thing gave it that "Cheeeese" kinda feel, but it does make it flow perfectly, but the Giraffe part made sense, at least to me it did. Awesome __________________ search

06-22-2003, 04:52 PM	#8
Basically Baked New Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 96 Grams: 671.15 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Shadowtime Shadowtimes the time when there are a lot of shadow but still alot of light. You can see perfectly but there are shadows everywhere.

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06-21-2003, 05:56 PM	#2
Devio Banned Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 342 Grams: 29.90 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	I like the title alot but the poem makes no sense.

06-21-2003, 10:59 PM	#4
imported_tychristine420 Jr. Member Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 152 Grams: 1,309.35 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	im only gonna say this once... that was a cool poem, and i bet you just wanted to post something, so i think that that was much better than something like uhhh, what kind of weed do you think this is? know i am done but before i push submit reply i must roll a joint and get real high... nah, not really, i might spark a bowl tho

06-22-2003, 12:50 AM	#5
Frylock New Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 63 Grams: 940.85 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	I think the poem is cool, except for the giraffe part at the end, it just kind of threw it off.

06-22-2003, 07:38 PM	#9
BrAiNdAmAgEd Jr. Member Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 244 Grams: 857.80 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	This poem made a lot of sense to me when i was stoned...The giraffe symbolizes my freedom, and the the wind symbolizes outter influences trying to twist and distort people. And the Glass and cheese razors represent the mulled over half truths of our world...

06-22-2003, 08:14 PM	#10
Frylock New Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 63 Grams: 940.85 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	I see, that's cool braindamaged, good poem.

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