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Old 07-03-2003, 03:51 AM   #1
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Default please read. it's something we all must know

drop some love and wrap it tight
it'll be much more than it was last night

the green is pasted a strange new shade
and still it shows so true so bright
back and forth and up and down
a ride that excites with anticipatoin, delight

its edge is glistening
with wetness and care
its slowly pressed together there
a shiver of delight and need and glee
i cannot wait, its all for me
i put my lips, close to its tip
give a light suck, to practice, rehearse

i set it to a flame
its emotions distraught
its spewing love, and joy, and sight
on one end, it reels in pain
and yet the other, so gently caressed
it knows it must be done and so it shall
this was its purpose, its nearly done now

it feels itselves end drawing near
but suddenly, without fear
the pain stops and it wonders...
wonders what new thing shall come
what wondrous, horrible, thing shall come
a darkness looms, a closing bang

darkness everywhere and so
its journey has not ended here
suddenly a crack of light
its brightness shining in dark of night
without remorse its skin torn 'part
an agony of pain, delight

his cellmates more, are torn and shredded
there blood is dripping, pulling, falling
and soon they are together
in a new skin, a new home
and it happens again.
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Old 07-03-2003, 03:52 AM   #2
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The life of a joint.

I hope you all now understand, the HORRORS you commit. Everyday

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Old 07-03-2003, 04:52 AM   #3
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I'm a humanitarian...that's why I smoke a pipe
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Old 07-03-2003, 05:12 AM   #4
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Default i dunno

i have no clue what your talking about, but hey Save a tree eat a Beaver!
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Old 07-03-2003, 05:22 AM   #5
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hmm....maybe i should have read what beats posted before replying...meh next time
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Old 07-03-2003, 06:20 AM   #6
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hmm....maybe i should have read what beats posted before replying...meh next time
Yes, reading the thread before you post is a good idea

Nice poem Beats, sounds like it could make some kick ass lyrics
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yeah cool poem man, nice little weed hell thing at the end. And man, i do that thing where you give the J a little suck before lighting it too, lol. I didn't know other people did too.
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I'm a humanitarian...that's why I smoke a pipe

GLASS (or wood or metal) KILLER!!!!!!! ROA!!!


How would you feel if you were nicely shaped and beautiful and someone sticks stuff in you and burns it?!
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Im never smoking weed again haha bulll **** i might go have a toke right now!
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