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Old 07-08-2003, 10:06 PM   #1
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Default "Topaz Rivers"

blood drips, and drips,
topaz rivers over fingertips,
slow red rivers pool around,
all the worlds bodies, now strewn on the ground

A wound in the heart of moral wealth
a shot in the face to public health
robbing the theif of his stealth,
taking the vain away from self.

the sun turns dark and black,
even the heroes are forced to fall back,
the moon shines red, a simble that means,
hopes are distorted and bleak are all dreams.

another bloodstain, on religious faith,
on top of the fears and hurt and hate,
standing alone are the devils wraiths,
condemning us all to our self wrought fates.
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Old 07-09-2003, 12:01 AM   #2
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Default "Golden love"

Sun shines, and shines
golden love over dark poetic lines
cool gentle breezes blow around
pushing airy leaves and seeds from branch to ground

A gift back to the earth
spring soil shifting,giving birth
giving life light
and light the grace of life

The sky erupts into a glorious aurora
rushing green vigor into flora
blue velvet and whispy cotton
darkness but a memory forgotten

another season of an endless year
emerald grass and that golden sphere
when something is endless there is nothing to fear
just new seasons and a new frontier


Sorry I had to brighten this thread up with my own poetry.
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Old 07-10-2003, 08:00 PM   #3
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Well yeah but now that you've brightened it up, i have to find a way to darken it... maybe tomarrow
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War of the poets eh? Harumph.

Awesome poem(s).
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