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Old 07-24-2003, 01:33 AM   #1
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Default just a poem i wrote

I don’t understand how you can do this

How you can let me down

Disguised by claims of “I love you”

Is it just a desperant attempt to cover it all up



The lies

Push me towards the line

The deceit

brings me down

The hate

Rises up in my body



You see past my feelings

You ignore my depression

Just cause you feel good about yourself

You selfish *****



Get off your pedestal

Your not the center of the world

Get over yourself

You will only get awaken with time



Untill you realize your faults

I will continue to be hurt won’t I

Will you continue this game with me



How long must you do this

Can you please let me go?

Can I go off into the world onto my own

Or will you finally stop hurting me



This may be it vikky

I can’t handle this anymore

Goodbye…I am dead



I had nothing better to do...so i put a poem i wrote on here...
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Old 07-24-2003, 01:41 AM   #2
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Women, can't live with em, can't shoot em

Cool Poem, you didn't limit yourself to rhymes and that can be a good a thing.
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Old 07-24-2003, 02:29 AM   #3
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nice poem

sounds like she ripped out your heart and took a $hit in your chest
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Old 07-24-2003, 08:01 AM   #4
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^^LOL
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Old 07-30-2003, 09:05 AM   #5
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nice poem

sounds like she ripped out your heart and took a $hit in your chest
that is quite a beautiful critique, Ernie, you
really do have such a way with words...sniff, cough-cough ...
you're really tearing me up!...
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Old 08-06-2003, 04:25 AM   #6
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thats a coool poem. I can write alright poety and play guitar... i wish i could sing
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Old 08-06-2003, 11:36 PM   #7
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Nice poem. What if you don't mind me asking did she do to you?
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