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Old 07-30-2003, 07:45 AM   #1
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Default Poem.

Overbearing panic attack entrenching my veins
In an hour, I'll be okay
I pray this pain will go away permanently someday

I've seen more than
I should have to
I've seen this on my own

This song is a poem to myself
It helps me to live
In case of fire, break the glass
And move on into your own, your own

Reoccurring drowning effect entrenching my brain
I hope you'll be ok someday,
So I can say that you moved on in the right way
We've seen this and
We've breathed this and
We've lived this on our own

This song is a poem to myself
It helps me to live
In case of fire, break the glass
And move on into your own

This song is a poem to myself
It helps me to live
In case of fire, break the glass
And move on into your own, your own

BREAK

This song is a poem to myself
It helps me to live
In case of fire, break the glass
And move on into your own

This song is a poem to myself
It helps me to live
In case of fire, break the glass
And move on into your own

Your own, your own, your own.
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Old 07-30-2003, 08:33 PM   #2
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That's pretty cool man.

It sounds like a song alot, a poetic song
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Old 07-31-2003, 01:20 AM   #3
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chill, man. Very chill. I hold a lot of respect for poets. I won an award for poetry at my school, but I didn't deserve it cause I spent maybe 2 minutes on it, and that was the only poem I've ever writtin. On top of that I'm not much of a fan of writing anything. So I gave the award to the person I though most deserved it in my class, who writes poems very frequently, and their very smooth too.
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Old 07-31-2003, 03:01 AM   #4
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I hate to be rude but you didn't write that. I know you never said that, but it seems like you posted the lyrics to an existing song and are taking the credit for yourself.

http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/taproot/poem.html


Taproot - Poem
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Old 07-31-2003, 05:13 AM   #5
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Ya man If you want to write a poem from anouther song or poet atleast give them some credit like in the title or before and after we read it.

It's definatly not cool if you tried to take it as your own.Thats a low.An all time low at that.

good looks fattyboombatty because at first I thought he wrote it.
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Old 08-01-2003, 06:20 AM   #6
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tisk tisk, I frown upon you.

Good catch FattyBoomBatty

Come one man, thats lame. Why did you bother posting a song that you didnt write.
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Old 08-01-2003, 07:32 PM   #7
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Who says he's not Shankey's_moe at hotmail.com?

You all seem to care so much, so why not email the person who wrote it and ask if he allowed it to be put on cheaptalk.
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Old 08-04-2003, 03:42 AM   #8
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Reading comprehension 101 - introductory course focusing on understanding the meaning of the words we read.




Taproot is a rock band on a major label. The reason I recognized what he was quoting is because this song got airplay in my area recently, and specifically the "in case of fire, break the glass" lyric caught my eye. Obviously the kid likes them and wanted to seem cool, deep, or intelligent to other members so he took their work and used it as his own. I was trying to be polite but man, everyone here gets it except beats.
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Old 08-05-2003, 03:58 AM   #9
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Beats,

Shankey's_moe@hotmail.com is the person who submitted the Taproot - Poem lyrics to www.azlyrics.com.

Probably just a misunderstanding there fatty, no reason to get defensive..
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