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Old 07-31-2003, 05:27 AM   #1
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the utmost pure beneath the hate
its all i can't see, its calling out to me
i look, i see a glimmer and it hums away
a dark grasp throws it down

i feel the heat, the molten pain
it coats, and hardens and locks it all away
a hammer strikes, and chips a piece
that does no good until it lands

like a catylyst inside a vial
it bubbles the earth and strikes with force
and melts the layer, that built up through time
has hidden all we see, and still it shows, though dimly lit

for a moment in eternity
a single second in all of time
life is pure,and open as a wound
without pain it bears its soul
its utmost feeling, through work and toll
its shines with pride and glows with envy
for those who look apon it

suddenly its all replaced
with agony and feeling hate
its pungnant dirt is eeking, creeping through my skin
instead of fleeing, my mind lets go,
says **** it all and sits alone.
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Old 09-10-2003, 10:54 AM   #2
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Thumbs up Thats some pretty intense stuff.



Nice to be able to have a victimless release whenever needed.... Thanks Rick.
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Old 09-11-2003, 12:14 AM   #3
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Yah, thanks for that.

Honestly I'm not an intense person. I guess I bottle things and throw them here to clear the stock.

Thanks though.
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Old 10-21-2003, 05:38 PM   #4
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good poem, i like it.
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