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Leithreas

Why, When you look at this world
You look around and get mad
Your emotions get torn and unfurled
It's hard to believe that you're the bad
When all you do is sit around
Not hurting your neighbors
You dig yourself into the ground
Forget about all your labors
That you've tried so hard to finish
You're family gets scared
You're life starts to diminish
Thinking that nobody ever cared
You hide yourself more in fear
Of being prosecuted and looked down upon
You hide yourself away unable to hear
Not knowing what's going on
This world is filled with predjudice and hate
The pressure is on your back
Weighing you down like a hundred pound weight
People look at you, saying your not on the track
There's nothing you can do to get rid of them
The people here, they can't see the light
So you curl up and hold your precious gem
Is it really worth it to ride off into the night
Leaving behind everything you've cared about
Riding off into the sunset leaving everything behind
You collapse and fall, begin to scream and shout
Twist around and start to unwind
The hardships of life can't get you now
You're too strong to be over taken
So you stregthen up and write your vow
Perhaps all those people were mistaken
When they said you were lost
For not doing what society has said
You're going to have to pay the cost
and face the one emotion you dread
Stand up to these persons
And tell them you're not wrong
When nothing works and everthing worsens
Stand up tall, proud and strong
And know that you'll do much better
Than all those people who can't see the truth
Say a word for them now, write them a letter
Tell them that you still have your youth
And that you can grow from your mistakes
You dont care about their word
Be confidant, raise the stakes
Then they'll be the ones that are absurd
They'll start realize how they went astray
And now they're where you were at the beginning
They're the ones that have become the prey
The world will stop its spinning
Just for them to see that they don't know
You're trials and tribulations are done
The eyes in your head start to glow
When you finally realize that you have won.

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"I am the Alpha and the Omega," says the Lord God, "who is and who was and who is to come, the Almighty." --Revelation 1:8

Have a nice day!

 

jaman

bong on my friend ! you control the bong , don't let the bong control you !

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freedom to grow , freedom to smoke .

Mr. President , please relieve us of our dependency on foreign oil !

Legalize hemp production !

Coolguy

It's a good first draft but it needs a little work. B-

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Herb Ninja

Nice one Leithreas, seemed kinda long to be honest though.

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Ron Paul for the Long Haul

Leithreas

It was kind of hard for me to end. I'm not very good with rhyming though

Read it twice, starting on line 1 and skipping every other line, then start on line 2 and read every other line.

 

twisty

I like it - i identify w/ it b/c i have a serious deficit of assertive capacity. It looks long - which is daunting for short attention span stoners - if you broke it up into stanzas, i dont think that it would look so scary literary long.