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Old 10-14-2003, 08:01 AM   #1
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Looking through your eyes of terror
Breathing through your nose of fear
Hearing all the hate forever
Tasteing every fallen tear

Neverending sight for safety
A helmet for every part of life
Scared of death overwhelming
Wasted time your priceless light
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Old 10-14-2003, 02:04 PM   #2
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ouch.. sounds like that hurts when you touch it. Very ambiguous - only someone who knew you and the experiences that this poem is a catharsis for would understand what its about. Its hard to identify with something you cant understand - if you added some specifics maybe it would be more emotive as it is it sounds like a cry of pain, then a salve but we dont really know why, how or what.
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Old 10-14-2003, 06:11 PM   #3
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I think it means someone who is so scared of death that they don't really live life. Atleast thats how I interpret it.
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Old 10-14-2003, 07:33 PM   #4
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In the end no helmet will save you. The poem is interpreted as you will.
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