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Old 10-17-2003, 12:26 AM   #1
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She was raped on the third floor
Of what she viewed as boring religion

She never even knew it happened

He comitted suicide on the fourth floor "under-construction"
Where he thought he could die alone

They just labeled him as insecure

They were all products of an uncompassionate place
Nobody really knew who they were
And none of us knew what really went on

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Old 10-17-2003, 12:40 AM   #2
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Sounds like scientology.
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Old 10-17-2003, 12:48 AM   #3
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Sounds like scientology.
I had never noticed that before. That's really......something, I just can't think of what.

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Old 10-17-2003, 12:59 AM   #4
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whats scientology and what does it have to do with that poem?
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Old 10-17-2003, 01:19 AM   #5
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whats scientology and what does it have to do with that poem?
I don't want get far into scientology as thats kinda off-topic in this thread, essentially a cult calling itself a "religion." I have heard of people being raped in their "churches" and they also have a long history of causing people to commit suicide. www.xenu.net if you want to know more. Sorry for going offtopic in your thread S. Reefer. Lets not let this thread get into that subject.
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Old 10-21-2003, 04:55 PM   #6
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morbid, but I really like it. I have a bit of constructive critiscism feel free to ignore it - the only bit i thought that didnt flow was the word "uncompassionate" possibly b/c i dont think its a word, having said that Shakespeare made up lots of words incl. "excellent" and TS Elliot made up some great words too incl. "polyphiloprogenitive"
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