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Old 12-18-2003, 04:56 AM   #1
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Loud Noise and Constant chatter
my universe is busy
spreading fingers where there is space
shouldn't be in here

can't protect my vital peace
the bubble has been shattered
implosion cracking, just sit alone
my universe is empty

finally some peace, rebuild the domewall curve
can't quite get the balance to work
it topples outwards now

the balance gone, i figure lost
its not so bad now
a little tender but better than the fight.

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Old 12-18-2003, 05:44 AM   #2
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((steals poem so I can go to a poem reading cafe and get laid))
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... I like it, a lot. I've read a few other poems you've written and posted on the forums, and I must insist that you are a very talented poet.

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