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Old 07-20-2004, 06:22 AM   #1
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only drips left in the bottle
i'm walkin drunk with a wobble
can't even stand so i just bobble
that ugly girl just turned into a super model
and nothin she says makes sense
am I that drunk or that dense
I dunno I didn't feel that wrench
but i threw the guy that hit me with it over the fence
now I'm tryin to find somethin to lean against
or just find a seat and smoke some sens
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Old 07-20-2004, 06:33 AM   #2
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only drips left in the bottle
i'm walkin drunk with a wobble
can't even stand so i just bobble
that ugly girl just turned into a super model
and nothin she says makes sense
am I that drunk or that dense
I dunno I didn't feel that wrench
but i threw the guy that hit me with it over the fence
now I'm tryin to find somethin to lean against
or just find a seat and smoke some sens
hey man. i think that's pretty good
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Old 07-20-2004, 05:21 PM   #3
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It was damn good. Was that song lyrics or a poem. I kind of made up a rap beat as I was going through it. Made it really good.
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Old 07-25-2004, 09:33 PM   #4
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yea its kind of a song, i havent made a beat, or even done anythin with it, i just enjoy writin **** like this.. my dream would be to do it for a livin, but im sure there's 923849238492384 people out there thinkin the same thing. glad you liked it tho
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Old 07-25-2004, 09:58 PM   #5
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I like it, I could imagine "eminem" singing something like this. For some reason when I read it , it was just his voice I heard.
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Old 07-26-2004, 06:45 AM   #6
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I like it, I could imagine "eminem" singing something like this. For some reason when I read it , it was just his voice I heard.
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