beats

the train clicks by
i bide my time;
look into the sun

the tracks are rusty
my seat is torn;
my meal is full of dirt

the bell toll wrings its hands frustrated
it cannot catch the time

i pulled town one hour late today
the clock says I was early

i thought, i might as well,
help time pass in good amount

i sat in an old coffee shop
and stared into my cup

the reflection looking up at me
had lost the sense of sight.

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Leithreas

great poem beats. the rythym was good but you skipped a beat in the 4th and 6th stanzas.

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