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manny · 11-06-2004, 06:28 PM

They don't know what 42 is
They just play the f***ing game
Ask if they know what they're saying
Are they stupid or insane
Oh my god I f***ing love them
It seems like they have a brain
Okay, dude don't tell a soul man
they're worth suffering and pain
They sit and hack and hack for hours
with their massive usage brain
I want to sit and learn their secrets
Under wealth or ease or rain.

JC49 · 11-06-2004, 07:38 PM

Not bad man. I dont particularly like poetry so Im a bit biased. But anyways I think you need to work on the general rythm and timing of the poem, it feels like it needs to flow. Maybe Im wrong.

Thats just my opinion, but keep expressing yourself. As long as you like it thats all that matters.

manny · 11-08-2004, 03:56 AM

There was a bunch of background info on the poem up there but it sounded stupid, so I deleted it.

Quote:

Originally Posted by JC49

I think you need to work on the general rythm and timing of the poem, it feels like it needs to flow.

Yeah, I wanted it like that, but messed it up...

NeX_06 · 11-11-2004, 01:34 AM

I like it, but I'm not sure what its saying. Are the friends blind trendy morons (impression I get from the first couple lines) or insanely smart people which can teach much (next impression I get) or are they simply normal people flyin' high and conversing with ya? In any respect though, I like it.

manny · 11-12-2004, 04:05 AM

It's ambiguous.

Sometimes they seem stupid and ignorant, almost stereotypical potheads, and other times they're brilliant, charismatic, amazingly interesting intellectuals. This doesn't seem to correllate with any particular drug or topic of conversation, although engaging in creative activities (like writing!) seems to help.

Outside of my biased perceptions, I'm sure they're all normal.

Sadly, I will soon be severed from this group for lack of transportation.

Oh yeah, the last 4 lines aren't about them.

11-06-2004, 06:28 PM	#1
manny Jr. Member Join Date: Oct 2000 Posts: 369 Grams: 838.50 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	a poem They don't know what 42 is They just play the f*ing game Ask if they know what they're saying Are they stupid or insane Oh my god I f*ing love them It seems like they have a brain Okay, dude don't tell a soul man they're worth suffering and pain They sit and hack and hack for hours with their massive usage brain I want to sit and learn their secrets Under wealth or ease or rain. __________________ It's so great, being able to come to a site like this and pretend we all smoke pot...

11-11-2004, 01:34 AM	#4
NeX_06 Jr. Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 106 Grams: 1,410.40 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	I like it, but I'm not sure what its saying. Are the friends blind trendy morons (impression I get from the first couple lines) or insanely smart people which can teach much (next impression I get) or are they simply normal people flyin' high and conversing with ya? In any respect though, I like it. __________________ Ohio Revised Code, Section 2925.11.C.3.a) Except as otherwise provided in division (C) (3) (b), (c), (d), (e), or (f) of this section, possession of marihuana is a minor misdemeanor. This is true for amounts of less than 100 grams, so move to Ohio and toke up w/ us

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11-06-2004, 07:38 PM	#2
JC49 Sr. Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 417 Grams: 2,794.95 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Not bad man. I dont particularly like poetry so Im a bit biased. But anyways I think you need to work on the general rythm and timing of the poem, it feels like it needs to flow. Maybe Im wrong. Thats just my opinion, but keep expressing yourself. As long as you like it thats all that matters.

11-12-2004, 04:05 AM	#5
manny Jr. Member Join Date: Oct 2000 Posts: 369 Grams: 838.50 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	It's ambiguous. Sometimes they seem stupid and ignorant, almost stereotypical potheads, and other times they're brilliant, charismatic, amazingly interesting intellectuals. This doesn't seem to correllate with any particular drug or topic of conversation, although engaging in creative activities (like writing!) seems to help. Outside of my biased perceptions, I'm sure they're all normal. Sadly, I will soon be severed from this group for lack of transportation. Oh yeah, the last 4 lines aren't about them.

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