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stripped and made to dance
by digitalextremist

you trusted her to a well loved uncle’s custody
who took advantage of his place of authority
stole her innocence promising individuality
swept off her feet and sold quickly into slavery
replacing her chastity with ignorant debauchery
violated every open place in fits of frivolous esctasy
virtue turned into a craving fiend so pleasure hungry
then stripped and made to dance inviting lewd company
conniving pimp cashing in on her eagerly yearning fertility
soon she’s abroad flaunting her young oiled body shamelessly
unsurprisingly she’s due to birth an illegitimate Iraqi baby
that’s what we get for trusting uncle Sam with our country

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// Digital Extremist

 

redeye4life

have to give you props for that one i like how you mad it on big metaphor

Chronic Smoker

First off i like the rhyme scheme, and understand where your coming from. Second off i just have to say keep it up, and post more often on here.

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imported_digitalxtremist

thanks guys! I all but gave up on *any* forum when it comes to finding a reader base, but I guess I'll just ditch everywhere but here

generally I write from a perspective that people balk at, this piece is more "acceptable" I think... in terms of spirituality at least. a lot of my work is existential, to a level thought insane -- this one is more isolated and simple, so I guess I'll stick with that when it comes to posting here.. I'll post a few more