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kronic kandie · 12-05-2004, 05:52 PM

Stare at this paper,
there is nothing written here.
Look over your right shoulder,
and quiver with fear.
See the icy breath upon you,
look over your left shoulder.
Feel the cry of those intimate, curious eyes,
shiver at you.
Here is where you're not.
As you listen to unspoken words being said.
Falling stars circle you.
Hold out your hands,
and watch them, silently.
Shut your eyes to see,
the invisible surroundings.

imported_brownie · 12-06-2004, 09:53 PM

another poem of yours I really dig. You have a nice abstract imagery style. maybe sometimes a little to abstract to convey a point to the unknowing reader, but I still enjoyed it nonetheless.

happy writing,
brownie

imported_digitalxtremist · 12-13-2004, 06:35 PM

I like it too.. brownie is right about the super abstract styles, but I do it too, so hey - no complaints here, I completely hear that. nice piece--

kronic kandie · 12-13-2004, 11:51 PM

thanks guys!! =) peace out til next time!
kronic kandie

12-05-2004, 05:52 PM	#1
kronic kandie New Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 36 Grams: 686.40 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	the nightmare Stare at this paper, there is nothing written here. Look over your right shoulder, and quiver with fear. See the icy breath upon you, look over your left shoulder. Feel the cry of those intimate, curious eyes, shiver at you. Here is where you're not. As you listen to unspoken words being said. Falling stars circle you. Hold out your hands, and watch them, silently. Shut your eyes to see, the invisible surroundings.

12-06-2004, 09:53 PM	#2
imported_brownie Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 242 Grams: 1,873.38 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	another poem of yours I really dig. You have a nice abstract imagery style. maybe sometimes a little to abstract to convey a point to the unknowing reader, but I still enjoyed it nonetheless. happy writing, brownie __________________ I follow my 3rd grade teacher's advice: Get 5 big servings of greens everyday

12-13-2004, 06:35 PM	#3
imported_digitalxtremist New Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 24 Grams: 674.10 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	I like it too.. brownie is right about the super abstract styles, but I do it too, so hey - no complaints here, I completely hear that. nice piece-- __________________ // Digital Extremist

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kronic kandie New Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 36 Grams: 686.40 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	thanks guys!! =) peace out til next time! kronic kandie

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