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Old 12-05-2004, 05:52 PM   #1
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Exclamation the nightmare

Stare at this paper,
there is nothing written here.
Look over your right shoulder,
and quiver with fear.
See the icy breath upon you,
look over your left shoulder.
Feel the cry of those intimate, curious eyes,
shiver at you.
Here is where you're not.
As you listen to unspoken words being said.
Falling stars circle you.
Hold out your hands,
and watch them, silently.
Shut your eyes to see,
the invisible surroundings.
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Old 12-06-2004, 09:53 PM   #2
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another poem of yours I really dig. You have a nice abstract imagery style. maybe sometimes a little to abstract to convey a point to the unknowing reader, but I still enjoyed it nonetheless.

happy writing,
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Old 12-13-2004, 06:35 PM   #3
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I like it too.. brownie is right about the super abstract styles, but I do it too, so hey - no complaints here, I completely hear that. nice piece--
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Old 12-13-2004, 11:51 PM   #4
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thanks guys!! =) peace out til next time!
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