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12-14-2004, 12:05 AM
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|  "secret" shivering with fear... those words were spoken. a first breath was made, but everything was still frozen. fading to black... appeared the faces. expressions secretly hidden, behind the cries. nothing became everything. emotions became a puzzle, thoughts tried to fit together. in a whisper, you disappear. |
 
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12-15-2004, 07:23 PM
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|  interesting poem. |
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12-16-2004, 11:39 AM
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| yes, interesting - I'm curious to know its context inside your thoughts... care to share? it's bursting with possible meanings |
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12-16-2004, 07:15 PM
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| thanks =) this poem is just about another point in my life, and another relationship. if you checked out my poem "perfect", that one was about a relationship as well. but this one is totally different.. different guy, different situation. it's pretty much sayin' that the relationship was startin' to go bad, other people made it worse, and then we broke up... it was hard. i wrote this one when i was in 14 and it means alot to me. peace out til next time! kronic kandie |
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