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| alright im writing another song, and i just was wondering if i could get some constructive critism about this one. It was partly about drugs when i wrote it (though the bigger picture it is just about any subject that we are cheated out of our liberty on). I had to abort that idea when i realized that our drummer and singer is completely against pot. so I guess it isnt about pot... whatever Legalize Freedom What would you do if I said Keeping your eyes on me is violating the sancity of privacy and how would you feel if I said Im gonna push it on you if your gonna push it on me Yeah im gonna push it on you if your gonna push it on me We dispute of Patriotism and Immorallity When stated so clearly the definition of liberty its not your choice, this is up to me And im gonna push it on you If your gonna push it on me yeah im gonna push it on you if your gonna push it on me push on Legalize liberty Legalize choice Legalize freedom Legalize freedom Cant you see Its not the number of steps we walk but the direction were taking let us choose our path Gonna choose it for you if your gonna choose it for me Gonna choose it for you if your gonna choose it for me to force us closer is only tearing us apart weve never been this close to seperation and weve never been this far gonna crusify you if your gonna crusify me gonna crusify you if your gonna crusify me thats what I have so far... here is something I wrote that may have been in the song would have the band members supported pot. ( a reference to the fact that legalization would end drug disputes and save the goverment money) Lets put an end to the disputes Theyre killing people over pennies lets put our faith in something new your wasting your time you cant cant keep hiding the truth it doesnt have to be this way it doesnt have to be this way if you just (chorus) so anyone know how i can improve this song, maybe a way to take the part I had to take out and turn it into metaphor so I can lie to them and say its about something else? it would all be pretty nice.
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