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idr · 01-22-2005, 04:56 AM

It just came to me.....
----------------------------------------------------------
When a child smokes pot

the smoke rises
into
the
clouds
higher
the clouds go
then the rain crys to the earth
they feeds the farmer
who feeds my father
who feeds my mother
Oh mother of mine

When a child smokes pot
its for his mother
as tears of joy run down her face

ChasinReveries · 01-22-2005, 07:29 PM

hmm..i see where ur going with it, and it was a good attempt but i don't necessarily agree with the msg of it...i didn't have any problem with how it was written, just the msg overall...
u should smoke pot for urself ha..

umm, i think the only thing i might change is the fact that u used cloud twice kind of clsoe together...it kind of jumbled up in the reading...re-wording that might make it flow a little better...

ps - i like the sig...waking life?

idr · 01-23-2005, 07:39 PM

yup, my fav movie.

actually i dont like the theme of the poem either... it just sounds good when your high.
thx for the input

01-22-2005, 04:56 AM	#1
idr Jr. Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 198 Grams: 733.85 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	when a child smokes pot It just came to me..... ---------------------------------------------------------- When a child smokes pot the smoke rises into the clouds higher the clouds go then the rain crys to the earth they feeds the farmer who feeds my father who feeds my mother Oh mother of mine When a child smokes pot its for his mother as tears of joy run down her face __________________ dream is destiny :: be someone

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01-22-2005, 07:29 PM	#2
ChasinReveries New Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 9 Grams: 668.90 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	hmm..i see where ur going with it, and it was a good attempt but i don't necessarily agree with the msg of it...i didn't have any problem with how it was written, just the msg overall... u should smoke pot for urself ha.. umm, i think the only thing i might change is the fact that u used cloud twice kind of clsoe together...it kind of jumbled up in the reading...re-wording that might make it flow a little better... ps - i like the sig...waking life?

01-23-2005, 07:39 PM	#3
idr Jr. Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 198 Grams: 733.85 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	yup, my fav movie. actually i dont like the theme of the poem either... it just sounds good when your high. thx for the input

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