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Old 04-20-2006, 04:56 AM   #1
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Default stoned crazy

I got very stoned
it was a trip
i wrote this jargon

It requires Oxygen to oxygenate
it is delusional delusion
it is one from the one when one wouldnt do
you dont see but reveal
reveal you conceal
a truth that is unreal
a spell to repell if one couldnt tell
that the thing that you were doing wasnt truly fluent
decided by the choice,divided by the noise
I am the doctor of life
I am the omni stone
i grow when i felt that dwelling here was stale
okay so say all
to forever you joined
from behind in the line
where the line failed to fail
so wait by your stream edges
and mow thine gross lawn
we are all connected
but disjointed all along

This cant exist!

Wait what was it that you were being?
Was that a dimensional plane,or were you just happy to be me?
good drugs friend,ill be different,but okay
okay so what was this all about?
healing the unifying force?
let's do it when we feel like it!
someone once said something so radical it claimed its own belief.
In disbelief he backenod off
and boarded in within
he made so no contemplators
could ever get right in
wait he said
musingly to himself
life is a laugh
live it up
love is love
and thats just math!
wash it down later when you cant swallow it
ok onto a next brain wave
ok onto a next brain wave

--

we control eachother
all controls all
all is all
all is rising
complexifying
all is nothing
dematerializing

understand this notion
and I shall help you my friends
live in a new world
a world that depends

gracefully decline
and race back forth
expressings ones need
to be a great force

i gave it all i got
and now im giving in
hey wait dont say that
it wont even start to begin!

Now the police rush my home
in panic frightened glee
and grab me by my necktie
and throw me down the street

i lived in a porch attic in micktunky
gave no time or thought
but a litte bit of nasty grew on me
when i soured it all up,with mild mildew rot

dont switch over like that im trying to dance
dance you werent you nancy
you mockery of nancy

Hey brave that backwards!
I cant I cant help
it seems I have to survive to live!
whats this entail?
Hm?
Ask that guy?
Who the fuck is he?
Should I trust him?
should I trust me?

This sounds like purgery!
great gattaca!
Theres a system here!
Bigger than me!
Hmm what should I do with it?

Wow,maybe I should do that

yes that sound about right

Keep going its doing well.
Just an astral thrust
raping you of sanity
making it wake up from an atrophy
of mind i might add
if i didnt mind
so should it be said
if saying is whats right?

Mr direct says:
"There is soemthing more than you in your universe!"

More direct then what was expected
the man turned around his wily head
he spun a strange glance
into some ego complex
gratifying within the self aggrandizing temple of the slowly growing damned

hark now my alarm clock sounded
wrought the world with its sickly potion
time for work in 30 minutes minus three
8:53
10:00?
i cant see it straight
let me put my glasses on
ah now i see
your trying to destroy me

The man stood up and glanced around
"Holy fuckin shit this is madness!
It seems everything i touch is me!
and I am it
but

Dimensional Alzyheimers

Forgetting Saves your Soul

Remembering is your Soul

hmm maybe I should give some little bits of advice
from a seasoned traveller
ive seen to have done it all before i knew what I was doing
then when it was done i asked
"was it worth doing?"
only if its strong enough
to destory what it loves
when it knows what its love doesnt know
can you grow here in this place?
what will you face
to see your own face?

No.
Stop that immediately,Im the obedience slave burden robot.
Look here.
Now here.
where do you think your looking?!
where?
you ask?
Oh its a funny place
things go forwards in time
as If we werent already
but just in a different direction
my god i solved it
is it spelled right?

maybe
maybe im insane!
damn...dont stop thinking folks,you'll go insane!
I once tried and I never was the same again
and again I was the same again
but really what it was was what it wasnt doing when there wasnt any time to get some sort of foothold in this geometric fucking jungle goodammit i could fight my fucking goddemn shit holed way out of your stinking mind mess maze mucked what was that?

Was that a uh...uh....uh experience?
yah i think that was an experience...im not really sure tho.
better make sure,go in for a second look

..
"No way!"

.. "why not?"

"its scary!"
"what!
Whats frightening you?
HEY! COME ONE! TELL ME!
SOMETHING IS SCARY!?!
WHAT MOTHERFUCKER!?
WHAT!?"

these words (worlds) are folding out onto this map
and I am here,where you are,telling you how to get out
its pretty easy
just dont remember what it feels to be scared
works doesnt it?
yes,lets call this death!

"My god...wait...god?are you there?
I was wonderign cuz....
there seems to be this thing bothering me
actually its a bunch of things
they are these events that keep happening
as if you were tryign to get me do soemthing"

GOD'S VOICE: (connect to source X voice file)
"whats that soemthing?"

"I dunno"

GOD'S SOARING RESPONSE: (politicians take note)
"maybe its what we were talking about earlier."



two units meet,one is charged X,the other charges Y
They shall do battle upon the cosmic plateau
then they create XY
thanks for complexifying with us today folks!
a little deeper means a little bigger here

Now i am soaked with pumice
the lover poked a hole

I want to grab onto the next elevator panel
a series of these panels are moving vertically


My recollection:
Smoketh the weed
my mind was entering a new dimension of sorts,pulsing through

I want the stretched ocean to replace the difference
these words are tools
lets excavate!
escavate what?
This
you mean this?
that was this before i made it into this,so you excavated that.
your position no longer satisfies me
restraining from calibration

good go to sleep
I want to hear your nightmare scream!


They paid the admission.
There were corporals milling about the first containment zone.
I and It went where it was darker,

many intersections
gradually rising
to undualte the surface ripples further
add a mathematical structure
grows along with it
in modulation of concentration
furthering towards an expansion of epic proportion
this is where there is the disturbance
the child walks in,not cared for by the strange golden god in the corner
the corner stone opens up slow,and asks to walk inside.
tiny soft feet float thier way across the wasteland of immunized dreams.
I taste a secret blend within all that is now
when it is here it comes into me,around,without me,but somewhere completely different
this teleports me to a new plane,and an interaction event shall ripple out now through the protostructure
and then i write here
and it falls insanely down through a teir structure

Afterwards everything sems lighted by a new orb
its encircling me
growing
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Old 04-21-2006, 06:57 AM   #2
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lol, you were so fkn bent when u typed that werent u mate
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Old 04-21-2006, 12:12 PM   #3
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writing down ur thoughts when you feel whacked out is probably the most therapeutic and hilarious thing to do
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Old 04-21-2006, 12:27 PM   #4
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Hmmm yeah this thread is def getting....

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Old 04-23-2006, 03:19 PM   #5
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why?
this is creatively written,i may have been stoned but its not the usual stoned jabber concerning president bush,gap clothes and the NFL or soemthing

i even went about answering existance at one point,i feel


what not dramatic enough for creative wiriting?

The Ocean of my Soul beckons Forever!
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Old 05-02-2006, 03:11 AM   #6
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Definitely very deep at some points, my man, i suggest you sift through it at a later time and edit it down to a finished product and go with it
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Hmmm yeah this thread is def getting....

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hardtimes, why would this thread get closed?
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