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Old 06-25-2006, 11:01 PM   #1
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Looking into your eyes,
I see myself reflected.
Perfect creation--
No lies or deception.

Gracefull you move,
like a leaf in the sky
flirting with air
I watch you float by

Longing inside to share my core
Wanting to show you what I have in store...

Unbridled emotion for the essence of your soul,
A total union, together, in spirit my goal.

Your energy is electric,
somtimes eclectic,
myself I've found, now totally infected

Deep inside I feel your mind..
and I manifest joy of the purest kind

Yearning for union, a completeness of one...
bound together, our destiny, under one sun.

Inside of you I see myself,
the best of the best,
full of vitallity and health

You insipire, drive, and push my being
But my surface emotions are all you are seeing...

Join me, together we can take on this place--
Admist the chaos of this industrialist rat-race.

I call out to you each night before sleep,
knowing you feel each telepathic peep. . .

Can you feel my longing, my love and attraction?
answer my calls my princess of satisfaction. . .

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Old 06-29-2006, 02:52 AM   #2
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Ive made an audio file out of this poem...

http://www.dadornta.com/wp-content/u...06/forher2.mp3

*shrug* it's only 2 mb/2min. long, but it definatley adds the "tone/vibe" that I wanted to convey when someone reads this...
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