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Old 08-02-2006, 05:09 AM   #1
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This poem is one that I had written a long time ago. I was going through a rough time in my life and this was my outlet for feeling rage and out of control.


It reaches me as if I have been hunted;
it is the night as I am the day
I feel it fingering my brain and I am just its puppet
It tastes my fluids and rejects me, as if I were the dinner
that has been sitting out all night
My body is unattended and yet still feels like it has a soul
It has no name and cannot call me
Yet I feel it beckoning me but cannot respond
I feel the urge to comply but I have no control
I see my legs moving as if I have given up all restraints
I taste the rotting air around me and my mouth will not close
I realize that It has all of me; my brain has given all to It
I have no say and float away like a feather in the wind
When I reach the end there will be nothing
but dreams and despair
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Then it starts to reverberate,
then I put on my shoes.
When it has pacified I start to
brush my hair,
as if I can snub it all away.
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Old 08-03-2006, 12:52 AM   #2
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deep and dark... just my style.
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Old 08-03-2006, 01:47 AM   #3
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Pretty good. You ever do any slams/performances?
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When they took the 4th Amendment away I was quiet because I didnt deal drugs//When they took the 6th Amendment away I was quiet because Id never been arrested//When they took the 2nd Amendment away I was quiet because I didnt own a gun//Now they took the 1st Amendment and all I can do is be quiet...
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Old 08-04-2006, 07:31 AM   #4
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wow, amazing very interesting
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Old 08-04-2006, 05:13 PM   #5
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NO.........I have never done any slams. I have never found anywhere close by were they do those kinds of things. I get pretty nervous in front of alot of ppl aswell.
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