Handprint ~ a poem

Perplexed Pixie · 08-26-2006, 07:55 AM

I wrote this today for an altered book page w/my handprint as the background let me know what you think

My handprint is here now for all to see
its banged and its bruised
With its scars, its held keys
its made beauty be set free

My handprint is here
with its wisdom and skill
to toss you a rope if in need
or rub off a cold chill

My handprint is here just in case you were'nt told
If Im not beside you, its here just to hold.

Cryo · 08-26-2006, 09:46 AM

Awww, I loved the ending of it.

JnEverett · 08-26-2006, 09:52 AM

I agree the ending was great. The rest was cool also though.

**Hookahs** · 08-26-2006, 04:03 PM

Very nice. I also liked. the ending, made me think about my gilfriend who lives in a different city.

BTW love the qoute by Sachel. So true.

Jake · 08-26-2006, 06:24 PM

Have ever looked at your handprint? I mean really looked at it?

homemadebubbler · 08-26-2006, 07:39 PM

Awesome poem. I always like your artwork. Keep writing and tokin'!

Perplexed Pixie · 08-30-2006, 01:58 AM

Hey Thanks guys. I really like it too and sometimes when I write something and reread it the next week or so I usually dont like it anymore The page didnt turn out so good but I still like the poem thanks again..j

imported_replica · 08-30-2006, 07:06 PM

I totally dug that. And, I'd totally dig more.

Fuzzking · 09-19-2006, 05:35 AM

Great sonnet? i wanna say, im not sure if u were thinkn about that but correct format im not too sure about the rhythmic pattern but great stuff. I really look forward to reading more from u!

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08-26-2006, 07:55 AM	#1
Perplexed Pixie Ladybug Sunflower Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 1,695 Grams: 46,356.80 Thanks: 310 Thanked 482 Times in 182 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Handprint ~ a poem I wrote this today for an altered book page w/my handprint as the background let me know what you think My handprint is here now for all to see its banged and its bruised With its scars, its held keys its made beauty be set free My handprint is here with its wisdom and skill to toss you a rope if in need or rub off a cold chill My handprint is here just in case you were'nt told If Im not beside you, its here just to hold. __________________ Always and forever she's a Pothead4sure~The artsie-fartsie-hippy type mom.... Please Dont Piss off the Fairies! I had a rose named after me and I was very flattered. But I was not pleased to read the description in the catalog: "No good in a bed, but fine against a wall."- Eleanor Roosevelt

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Cryo Jr. Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 192 Grams: 2,979.80 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Awww, I loved the ending of it. __________________ It's bad luck to drown a postman. 1000 things to do while high. ::.From the hazy minds of the Lounge.:: Out since '03

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JnEverett Jr. Activist Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,084 Grams: 4,099.48 Thanks: 0 Thanked 5 Times in 2 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	I agree the ending was great. The rest was cool also though. __________________ CT Headline News l Posting Guidelines l NORML l LEAP

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Jake Sr. Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 6,612 Grams: 36,876.54 Thanks: 337 Thanked 991 Times in 599 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: -1.000%	Have ever looked at your handprint? I mean really looked at it? __________________

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homemadebubbler Always bubblin' Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 4,488 Grams: 303.01 Thanks: 556 Thanked 377 Times in 194 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Awesome poem. I always like your artwork. Keep writing and tokin'! __________________ When they took the 4th Amendment away I was quiet because I didnt deal drugs//When they took the 6th Amendment away I was quiet because Id never been arrested//When they took the 2nd Amendment away I was quiet because I didnt own a gun//Now they took the 1st Amendment and all I can do is be quiet...

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