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Old 08-29-2006, 03:34 AM   #1
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So its been a while since I've posted and I got this kinda floating in my mind while smoking a blunt at lunch today.

I call it 4:20 24/7

We'll here its 4:20 24/7 and when I light the blunt I feel like I'm in heaven. Some say its a crime but they just waste there time while I smoke my blunt and slip into sublime. The war is alright but give peace a chance why shoot guns when you can just blaze a blunt and dance? After a long day of school and shit I just cant wait to get out of the door and split. The first thing I do to get in the zone is open up the fat chronic sack and get mad blown. I remember back in the day when me and chad used to drive to where there were barrels of hay blaze the fat chronic sack till my mom called up to say hey. While we get older and time flys by theres one thing that will stay the same and that is the fact that I'll always be high. So blaze your blunts and clear your bongs because your life is just one phat day long and when my day is over I dont know what I'll do, maybe I'll blaze with god and he can write me and I.O.U.


Feel free to give me advise its still kind of a rough draft
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Old 08-29-2006, 04:01 AM   #2
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Ptretty good. You thinking of it as a rap or a poem? Performance poem? Beat or no beat?
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Old 08-29-2006, 04:00 PM   #3
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i liked it
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Old 08-29-2006, 07:27 PM   #4
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I dont know what I really think of it as I dont rap nor do I have that much interest in rap, however my friend rapped it to a beat and it sounded pretty good minus a few parts that I will touch up later tonight. I mean it could be the lyrics to a song or something I'm not really sure yet, just something I got the inspiration to write....... Now time to go to the drug counsler/pshyc
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I like that man. It's got some really cool lines that I'm sure a lot of us relate to.
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