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Old 09-23-2006, 12:27 AM   #1
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In a faraway paradise a legend was born
on a moon lit trail in an olive yard.
I met the keyhole keeper that night
Had all the answers but his time was tight....
Said theres a toad in the stone
that fell from the sky
fairies in the clouds
and the phantom fog
serpentine shadows
and the faces of fate.
I fell to my knees
I began to pray
Please help me
find the passageway...

In a faraway paradise a legend was born
on a moon lit trail in an olive yard..
he had a bag of tricks
said I could take my pick
then the serpentine shadows scared him away
I saw the faces of fate
and the phatom fog
I fell to my knees
I began to pray
Please help me
find the passageway...
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Old 10-04-2006, 07:29 AM   #2
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Very nice.... Very nice indeed...
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I really like it.

Consequently, "Legend" was my nickname in highschool.
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Old 10-05-2006, 11:38 AM   #4
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In a faraway paradise a legend was born
on a moon lit trail in an olive yard.
I met the keyhole keeper that night
Had all the answers but his time was tight....
Said theres a toad in the stone
that fell from the sky
fairies in the clouds
and the phantom fog
serpentine shadows
and the faces of fate.
I fell to my knees
I began to pray
Please help me
find the passageway...

In a faraway paradise a legend was born
on a moon lit trail in an olive yard..
he had a bag of tricks
said I could take my pick
then the serpentine shadows scared him away
I saw the faces of fate
and the phatom fog
I fell to my knees
I began to pray
Please help me
find the passageway...
"I truly adore this poem!
Seriously, I like to write, poems included,
and the words you put down for whatever reasons and past moments put you there, Intrigued me. HAHA.

Just wanted to give you a feel good, YOU REALLY ARE WORTH something comment, cuz its def. true.

It was 4:20 17 mins. ago

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Old 10-05-2006, 11:50 AM   #5
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THis was wrote when I was feeling very confused.
I wondered when you guys would finally comment on this.
Its one that I truly love and Its been with me for over 20 years.

~A very young girl with a unrealistic look at life, confused and asking for help. Love the feedback please post more. How does this make you feel.??...

Try saying it witha lyrical tone~ It was written as a song..
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Old 10-05-2006, 11:59 AM   #6
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THis was wrote when I was feeling very confused.
I wondered when you guys would finally comment on this.
Its one that I truly love and Its been with me for over 20 years.

~A very young girl with a unrealistic look at life, confused and asking for help. Love the feedback please post more. How does this make you feel.??...

Try saying it witha lyrical tone~ It was written as a song..

"It makes me feel.

Yes!
Ha.
Hey? I already have an ad about something like what I'm about to ask/say in the 420 trader, but n e way, maybe I could try to make it into an actual song if you would like/ even want something done like that with your own words from someone else...
?????
IDK.
Its just been something that I've been trying.
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Old 10-05-2006, 12:09 PM   #7
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Thats so cool. I cant xplain the way I sing it tho ..lol I wonder if you got the same tune in mind... lemme know what ya got for me ok.(Exicited!! )
I remember your add in the 420 trader but I never really connected the two.
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As some of you might know XT has been working to put music on my lyrics.
Well his music was cool Im sure you'll all hear it but I wanted it to sound the way It did when I wrote it lol Ok I dont claim to be a singer .. this is crazy to let all of you hear my voice here but oh well,....
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Very brave to sing, especially to no music ^_^

Awesome poem, by the way.

Sing it to a tempo and I could put it over some music :P
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As some of you might know XT has been working to put music on my lyrics.
Well his music was cool Im sure you'll all hear it but I wanted it to sound the way It did when I wrote it lol Ok I dont claim to be a singer .. this is crazy to let all of you hear my voice here but oh well,....
have a good laugh....
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