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Tenderlungs · 10-09-2006, 10:32 PM

I tried a new writing style out, and I'm not to sure how I feel about this one, so any criticism or comments are appreciated. Thanks for reading.

Sit back with the octopus spine
Demanding all the respect a nazi would get
Fretting over the inevitable
Your silent creed of intolerance
And despicably change your pace

Proudly fly your peace sign sticker
On the way to the voting center
Cast a ballot for your machine gun colleagues
Making love to the idea of war

Find yourself in a bottomless hole
Slipping to the epitomy of the hipocritical disgrace
Such potential that went to waste
Such potential that went to waste

JnEverett · 10-09-2006, 10:37 PM

So it sounds like your talking about someone who is a hypocrite correct?

I like it in a dark kind of way though I have one question.....what is an octopus spine?

Tenderlungs · 10-09-2006, 11:09 PM

Well there is no spine to an octopus so I was basically just trying to say spineless in a more descriptive way.

king_ofbonghits · 10-09-2006, 11:36 PM

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Originally Posted by Tenderlungs

Well there is no spine to an octopus so I was basically just trying to say spineless in a more descriptive way.

wow i never woulda caught that. sweet poem though... it is a poem right? sorry im just really blazed and cant decide what is what right now.

Tenderlungs · 10-09-2006, 11:54 PM

Yeah, it's a poem, glad you liked it, man.

JnEverett · 10-09-2006, 11:56 PM

I would never have gotten the Octopus spine = no spine either...very good play on words.

Tenderlungs · 10-10-2006, 01:10 AM

Thank you.

WhiteLight · 10-10-2006, 01:58 AM

I could have also interpretted octopus spine as being laid back considering the nedxt line is to demand obedience.

**Sofa King** · 10-10-2006, 06:06 PM

I caught that spineless thing right off, but only because there was an Octopus thing on Discovery Channel last night. Other then that I would have been lost.

ADIDAS · 10-10-2006, 06:26 PM

Well the octopus spine was a pretty obvious metaphor for spineless. So let me interpret, it is about someone going to vote in favor of the war, yet they dont want to go to war themselves and have a peace sign sticker in their window? Hence hypocrite and spineless...

10-09-2006, 10:32 PM	#1
Tenderlungs Sr. Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 714 Grams: 975.55 Groans: 24 Groaned at 10 Times in 8 Posts Thanks: 518 Thanked 144 Times in 88 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Sit back with the octopus spine I tried a new writing style out, and I'm not to sure how I feel about this one, so any criticism or comments are appreciated. Thanks for reading. Sit back with the octopus spine Demanding all the respect a nazi would get Fretting over the inevitable Your silent creed of intolerance And despicably change your pace Proudly fly your peace sign sticker On the way to the voting center Cast a ballot for your machine gun colleagues Making love to the idea of war Find yourself in a bottomless hole Slipping to the epitomy of the hipocritical disgrace Such potential that went to waste Such potential that went to waste

10-09-2006, 10:37 PM	#2
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10-10-2006, 06:06 PM	#9
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10-10-2006, 06:26 PM	#10
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10-09-2006, 11:09 PM	#3
Tenderlungs Sr. Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 714 Grams: 975.55 Groans: 24 Groaned at 10 Times in 8 Posts Thanks: 518 Thanked 144 Times in 88 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Well there is no spine to an octopus so I was basically just trying to say spineless in a more descriptive way.

10-09-2006, 11:54 PM	#5
Tenderlungs Sr. Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 714 Grams: 975.55 Groans: 24 Groaned at 10 Times in 8 Posts Thanks: 518 Thanked 144 Times in 88 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Yeah, it's a poem, glad you liked it, man.

10-09-2006, 11:56 PM	#6
JnEverett Jr. Activist Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,084 Grams: 1,911.83 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	I would never have gotten the Octopus spine = no spine either...very good play on words.

10-10-2006, 01:10 AM	#7
Tenderlungs Sr. Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 714 Grams: 975.55 Groans: 24 Groaned at 10 Times in 8 Posts Thanks: 518 Thanked 144 Times in 88 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Thank you.

10-10-2006, 01:58 AM	#8
WhiteLight New Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 19 Grams: 668.15 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	I could have also interpretted octopus spine as being laid back considering the nedxt line is to demand obedience.

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