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Old 04-26-2007, 06:43 PM   #171
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Verse about a relationship I was getting over recently

My heart sank, I couldn’t believe the words that you said
All the thoughts about me came out, fucked me up in the head,
And I was hurt, your opinion was so essential to me,
It took a lot for me to think, “Why are you special to me!?
Why am I hurting myself? What did I do to deserve,
The ridicule dished out, and how did you have the nerve?”
For the first time all the negative in you showed all at once,
I took a look at what I had, and grasped it wasn’t enough,
And the heart that only used to pound when holding you to it,
Started beating on without you, realized I could get through it,
You kicked dirt in my direction, it made me open my eyes,
“It’s time to realize Dark, you need something new in your life”
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Old 04-26-2007, 06:48 PM   #172
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Couple verses from the same song,

An expedition of my mind, transition redefined,
I digress the point in time when my prison has left you dry
My torment was exclaimed, never tamed when your upon me,
My name is left slain, and only then the pain stopped me,
And I’d continue, I’d continue to let you know
Of your crude behaviors and you need more steps to grow
How little I knew, how brittle your bones grew,
‘Cause my words, only few began to brew a feud,
And while your skin blistered, bones crack and tears fall,
Only then I heard your cries that before didn’t hear at all
I was deaf to your pain, blind to your desolate reflection,
It took your dying eminence to even see the detection,
So now I sit with patience, waiting to see you again,
To try out my apologies, maybe to be your friend
Because my views were unfledged, unkind and untimely
And my ambition is to forget it, but that seems to be unlikely

In the wake of my mistakes, I leave you burning again
Bones break, nerves quake, I have you hurting again,
Concerns are condemned, and there’s not a reason to cry,
Because my actions are infringed, singed trees and my pride,
No more complying to my insolence, the words have become numb,
Phrases from a stranger, and to think I used to be someone
And now I’m unknown in your memory because my choice of words,
You rather forgive than forget, and that poise is absurd
The thoughts still churn, of the hate I gave you in discern
The back of your mind is clouded, trying to save all the concern
Yet you’re still burned, scarred in the mirror only covered in make-up


This really didn't have any flow and what not, I just kept writing. 2nd one isnt done
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Old 04-26-2007, 06:52 PM   #173
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Let’s find a way to run away from a life full of pain and strife,
What direction I’m going I can’t tell now,
No room in heaven, I’m twenty-seven and hell bound,
The IRS is on my ass for the check that I didn’t cash
Outta gas so I’m looking around for what to sell now,
So I’m finding some vicodin pills, got me subsiding and ill
But I was hiding them still, daily,
So I’m trying and fighting the will, but I’m in denial still
Sorry you might find me killed baby
Pop your vics for the night, put a bit of light in my life,
I feel alright when I’m high, beyond emotional,
Stop the ride on the right, I’m not alright, I might die,
I don’t feel fine I think I’m, going out of control
Feelin’ buzzed, I’m relaxed, I’m going numb now,
Laid on the ground, on my back, and now I’ve come down,
I’m on a stretcher and looking at everyone around,
I made it around late enough just to see the sundown

This was a remix of a Tech n9ne verse about ecstasy, turning mine into a verse about vicodin. 2-3 lines are the same

This is the Tech version:
Let’s find a way to run away from a life full of pain and strife,
What direction I’m going I can’t tell now,
Mr Seven Twenty Nina tells me I’m hell bound,
The IRS is on my ass for the check that I didn’t cash
And the let me from child support felt like I fell down
So I’m looking for ecstasy pills, Tech is the next to be thrilled
Seconds from method we ill daily,
My brains cooking the recipe will crackin the best of me killed
Sections of seven I feel crazy
Hit the club in the night with a little bit of drug in my life
I put your lovin in real hype, beyond delivering
Put my feet on the side, separate from my wife,
In the middle of a crisis Im high, shaking and shivering,
Rolling buzzed I’m related I’m going dumb now
Drinking liquor I’m faded and having fun now
Loaded gun and I’m tripping with everyone around
Keep this piece stuck in the sky, I never wanna come down
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Old 04-27-2007, 07:00 PM   #174
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HERES ONE OF MA 16z

I MAY STAY FRESH, TAKE ANOTHA GUESS,

DRESSIN TO IMPRESS, BLING AROUND MA CHEST,

BLUNT SPARKED PASSING IT TO THE LEFT,

MOVIN LIK A JET, HOMIES SEE ME AS A THREAT,

TAKIN GIRLS HOME, LIKE A PET,

SPITIN GAME LIK A VET, RECORDING FOR A CHECK,

WAKIN UP DISMANTELD, FEELIN LIK A WRECK,

IF i WERE TO JOIN MONEY 4 LIFE

SD WOULD PLACE A BET, LIKE WE WERE THE LOTTERY,

CAUSE WE COME BACK SLAUGHTERIN, THE WACK MCz,

WE GOT THEM PRAYIN ON THEY KNEES, ASKIN GOD TO SEND THEM 2 HOT 16z,

BUT WE GOT THE GIFT, SO LET US BREATH,

D MONEY, SNOOPS, NOODLES N TREES BEST BELIEVE WE 4 WORLD WIDE Gz,

BITCHES AND EVEN HATERS, DO AGREE,

I LEARNED HOW TO RAP BETTER, BEFORE I COULD READ

DONT THINK SHIT CAME FREE, WE DID ARE DEEDS

NOW SNOOPS N TREES, SITIN BAK COLLECTIN OUR FEES,

NO INTRODUCTIONS YALL KNOW WHO WE BE..
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Old 04-29-2007, 01:01 AM   #175
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The meek really shall inherit the Earth
Once all strong men are perished and purged
I know it aint fair and it hurts
To watch someone who dares to be first
To grab at any opportunity
Emerge strong in a world of luncacy
It's a crazy world; you and me
Were originally created equal
But you got a battle between good and evil
Goin on your head, like you got people
Fighting inside you; I doused mine in diesel,
Lit a match, watched em go up in smoke
One night when I was drunk and broke
I watched my troubles fade away
And black and white turn to shades of grey
The world's my playground; I couldn't wait to play
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Old 04-29-2007, 10:16 AM   #176
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i wish it was easy to speak,
i wish it was easy to teach,
i wish it was easy to grab a dream,
to feel like your life has a meaning,
but dont give up until you actually stop breathing,
have some faith in ma raps, before you stop reading,
give me some credit, my hearts bleeding,
tryna recieve positive feedback, im trapped,
two doors, both painted black, a shadow,
crazy lik magic, pullin a rabbit out a hat,
a cat out the sack, weed in the bowl,
brain still intacted, motivation is somethin that i lag,
but atleast i aint out there killin over a different color rag,
wut comes around goes around,


ITS JUST LIKE TAG...

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Old 05-10-2007, 11:16 AM   #177
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Fuck being broke, i stay stackin hella chips
a bitch suckin my dick, white shit on her lips
niggas wanna trip, time to unload my clip
get money out a bitch and go cop a zip
i stay smokin sacks, slangin cream, stackin cash
beezy off a line steady shakin that ass
back that that thang up lemme get some of that
let me hit it from the back before you get yo ass slapped
if my niggas need help i aint holdin back
my gat go blap blap what you know about that
cant hear the gun shots over the sound of my slap
lay a nigga on his back this fools life's a wrap
i got bitches on the track white asian and black
steady addin paper to the size of my stacks
i dip into my stash and roll up some trees
while a bitch is on her knees makin money for me
i dont gotta pay shit i get whatever for free
i grow my own weed from straight white widow seeds
you can smell my shits all the way down my street
smells like some straight skunk everyday of the week
i smoke by the g, it gets me weak at the knees
stuck mode on my couch, dank smoke in the breeze
a call comin in somebodys needs that white
give em what they want and count my money all night

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Old 06-01-2007, 06:48 AM   #178
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im high as fuck yall


ma words get slurred, ma hataz get burnt,
i turn around and blaze up the blunt, i do it socially, man i do it for fun,
atleast i aint on tweek, grabbin for the gun,
but when i push weight, its done by tons,
then its suddenly exchanged for funds,
man im gonna grab the gold in life, and snatch it and run,
and ima take over, wether i do it drunk, or sober,
i got the bomb, from june to october,
ma raps is gettin hot, but urs is jus getin colder
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I'm 'bout to spit wind better get out yer sail,
if yer frail grab tha rail, duck yer head I'm 'bout to hail,
find tha bale mend tha pale, I'ma send a gale,
I'm shining and yer blinding from pen to Braille,
there's green on our bread cause this thread's kinda stale,
a class of the dead looks like we're all tryna fail,
find a scale... weigh up... I'm a fucking pissed whale,
...Dick'll tear ya apart and call ya Ishmael,
Like you're in the fish tale though you know yer in a fish tail,
Shit... not even Brosnan could pierce a suit of this mail,
Hide yer kids cause I'm Israel, this shit IS real and I'm a big deal and,
I place tha bet... stacked to the ceiling,
Right before Trebek.... bitch I'm wheelin' ,
can't stop me... no wait... you got me,
the only time I'm stallin is when you Trotsky ,
yer not me, better watch me if I got beef,
cock da shotty, rock ya body, shoot like paparazzi,
Neo-Nazi... take out da Nazi and you know I'm ruthless,
they sent me in tha Matrix and I row reduced it,
I roll wit blue crips, got a bowl and two clips,
Fine weed I grew it... you knew it they call me,
straight up, paid up, I trade up like Wall Street,
I'm all street, I ball street, iced up like Crosby,
Shit... not even a toilet could stall me, that's all me.


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are we making our own raps here?
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