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homemadebubbler · 11-01-2006, 09:51 PM

I'm not really sure if anyone will find any interest in it, but in all honesty, I dont care all that much. Like any writer should, I write for myself, not for the masses.

Based on True Events

Finger tips bleed
from deeds done cheap.

Ropes of bondage
and thoughts of you.

Half burnt cigarettes
and hearts shattered lie on the floor.

Tender wrists cut shallow
Pessimists unite.

A song for the lovers.
A battle cry for those alone.

Thoughts of you fill my head,
and my body fills with dread.

Gold coated petals,
rain from your back as you walk.

I reach out to touch them, if only for a moment
before they dissolve, and never were.

Just cant let a piece of you fall away.
But of course my hearts kept at bay
As I realize they never were,
and never will be.

A pitiful attempt
to escape this pit of hell.

Such a waste of love
Flowers of despair.
She doesn't care.

Venting the rage,
to find an empty page.

An empty soul,
a hallow bowl.

Take a bow,
say goodbye,
and kiss yourself goodnight.

IF ya'll like it, I have plenty more.

XT Dream · 11-02-2006, 08:30 AM

"MMMM Hmmm.

I like it a lot! It seems I can identify with some of it, or relate the words to myself with my ownself... HAHA, well yea.

Very good indeed. I give you all the credit it deserves."

Perplexed Pixie · 11-08-2006, 02:21 PM

I very much like the intospection although damaging its also rejuvinating, basicly a quandary of feelings thats very well put together. I have concern and unexpectedly a connection. I truly hope you keep writing and that it helps you as much as it has helped myself and many others.

rich420 · 11-08-2006, 05:53 PM

its nice man. good job.

11-01-2006, 09:51 PM	#1
homemadebubbler Blue Bubblin' Bubbler Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 3,921 Grams: 7,169.07 Groans: 3 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 82 Thanked 89 Times in 50 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	BAsed on true events- a poem I'm not really sure if anyone will find any interest in it, but in all honesty, I dont care all that much. Like any writer should, I write for myself, not for the masses. Based on True Events Finger tips bleed from deeds done cheap. Ropes of bondage and thoughts of you. Half burnt cigarettes and hearts shattered lie on the floor. Tender wrists cut shallow Pessimists unite. A song for the lovers. A battle cry for those alone. Thoughts of you fill my head, and my body fills with dread. Gold coated petals, rain from your back as you walk. I reach out to touch them, if only for a moment before they dissolve, and never were. Just cant let a piece of you fall away. But of course my hearts kept at bay As I realize they never were, and never will be. A pitiful attempt to escape this pit of hell. Such a waste of love Flowers of despair. She doesn't care. Venting the rage, to find an empty page. An empty soul, a hallow bowl. Take a bow, say goodbye, and kiss yourself goodnight. IF ya'll like it, I have plenty more. __________________ When they took the 4th Amendment away I was quiet because I didnt deal drugs//When they took the 6th Amendment away I was quiet because Id never been arrested//When they took the 2nd Amendment away I was quiet because I didnt own a gun//Now they took the 1st Amendment and all I can do is be quiet...

11-02-2006, 08:30 AM	#2
XT Dream Jr. Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 573 Grams: 1,723.60 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	"MMMM Hmmm. I like it a lot! It seems I can identify with some of it, or relate the words to myself with my ownself... HAHA, well yea. Very good indeed. I give you all the credit it deserves." __________________ " Jobs and Haircuts. Two of my greatest fears. Reality too. Amen.

11-08-2006, 02:21 PM	#3
Perplexed Pixie Ladybug Sunflower Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 1,690 Grams: 42,663.99 Groans: 1 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 294 Thanked 479 Times in 180 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	I very much like the intospection although damaging its also rejuvinating, basicly a quandary of feelings thats very well put together. I have concern and unexpectedly a connection. I truly hope you keep writing and that it helps you as much as it has helped myself and many others. __________________ Always and forever she's a Pothead4sure~The artsie-fartsie-hippy type mom.... Please Dont Piss off the Fairies! I had a rose named after me and I was very flattered. But I was not pleased to read the description in the catalog: "No good in a bed, but fine against a wall."- Eleanor Roosevelt I don't want to be the glue that holds your pieces together I don't want to be your idol See this pedestal is high and I'm afraid of heights I don't want to be lived through A vicarious occasion Please open the window

11-08-2006, 05:53 PM	#4
rich420 Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 1,289 Grams: 2,485.85 Groans: 0 Groaned at 1 Time in 1 Post Thanks: 20 Thanked 20 Times in 20 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	its nice man. good job. __________________ I live life like the captain of a sinking ship. Rip the night away MySpace PlurSpace

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