Dank Perception

Hopefully I am not imposing on the rules of the forums, but this is a brief poem about my experience with acid. I wrote it about two months ago and was jsut getting back into poetry. I hope to hear from everyone around here, critiques please ^_^

Here it is:

A Poem That I Wrote

Beautiful Remembrance
Embraced with joy
Euphoria explosion
Lovelyness deployed

Exquisite sun...
Lush, summer sky
The trees are beating
Through these eyes

A bodacious feeling
Tingling inside

I was told to be ready
For an adventerous ride
I never thought that
it would change my life...

I feel the warmth
I can read your mind
Feel your happyness
Mind retortion
Being realigned

-Deltronic


EDITTTTT: I smoked alot of chronic while on it, so... It has relations to marijuana a bit too.

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Alecstasy

siiiiick yo!

and i think this does go against the ruled of this forum cause it dosent mention weed at all....haha be prepared for it to be deleted!

if it stays then way to go and hopefully i get around to experiencing some acid for myself soon that would be too cool but im waiting for the perfect time

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And if the cloud bursts, thunder in your ear
You shout and no one seems to hear.
And if the band you're in starts playing different tunes
I'll see you on the dark side of the moon

Dank Perception

Thanks dear...
If it makes for peace, I smoked near half an ounce while on the particular drug.

Plainsman1963

No...Doesn't quite work that way.

The Original post was about an off topic substance...Going back and tacking on "oh yeah, I smoked a bunch too" isn't the way to get around it.

Take a look at our posting guidelines and everybody needs to remember that discussing other drugs in conjunction with cannabis doesn't mean just tack on a line or two about toking and your thread is good.

Thread closed.