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Old 11-29-2006, 03:40 AM   #1
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I wrote all these within a 5-10 minute period in Physics class today. Im just copying them strait out of my notebook without editing. So keep in mund I just started writing without any real thought or purpose so these arn't the greatest but I think some parts a pretty cool.
I've been doing alot of thinking about where the world is right now, and I know that the world can not continue the it is going. People just dont think right any more, there is so much rong with the world and no one cares, and many people even ridicule those who do care (tree hugger, enviromentalist). There needs to be a way for these people to understand.
All these little poems all have a common theme of change and revolution.



when will it happen?
today?
tommorow?
how will it happen?
peacefully?
with violence?
And who will be responsible for it when it does happen?
will it be You




when the inpossible is possible
when dreams turn into reallity
when the hope of the future becomes satisfaction of the present
It will be done




what does tommorow hold?
will it be the same as today?
and yesturday,
and the day before that?
Or will it be different?
will something change?
will the world understand?
When
Who
and maybe most importent
Why
The reason the world needs change
we can no longer live
the way we have been
We must change
must




the World needs change.
the same way We all need air to breathe
follow me.
the World needs change

the World needs change
the same way it has before
its not to late
the World needs change




Please before anyone is too critical keep in mind I wasnt trying to write great poetry, I just had alot of things to say and wrote whatever came out.
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Old 11-30-2006, 02:33 AM   #2
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when the inpossible is possible
when dreams turn into reallity
when the hope of the future becomes satisfaction of the present
It will be done
Damn, I really like that one. These are some pretty cool poems, keep up the good work!
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Old 12-03-2006, 11:31 AM   #3
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those poems could be described as either bone, or elbow deep. Wow. That is some profound stuff to think about when ure baked.
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That is deep. I'm sure if you get to thinking about it alot, you can help. You can make a difference. I'm thinking about working to save the enviroment when I grow up, and I have started to change my thought patterns to start deeply thinking about that kind of stuff more often. You know... your thoughts are you. They make up who you are and that will just lead to cementing your beliefs and values. Keep on the road man. Also keep writing poetry, it's great.
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