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ptpotsmkrondaDL · 12-21-2006, 05:32 AM

I never can tell, what tomorrow will bring.
Yet, I still awake each day to face life's fate.
Always dreaming of what it'd be like if I took another way.
Forever looking back, to the hardest choice, the one worst day.
Although I know that you're OK, I pray.
Everyday I pray.

I try not to look back, at all of my mistakes.
I look back at you, and see nothing I choose was a mistake!
You're almost one now, My Beloved Angel Child.
I look for items to buy you, to remind you of your beauty.
I found nothing, nothing even half your beauty.
And I prayed.
Everyday I prayed.

Then my words, once again, started flowing.
"Pictures are worth a thousand words,"
You, My Love, are worth so many more!
My Dear, I fear, theres nowhere near enough words,
To interprate your worth, and meaning to myself, or your Mother or Father.
And I pray,
Everyday I pray.

For fair warning, there is not enough time, within this life, to see all beauty.
To appreciate in each dark sorrow, there is a light.
I was lucky enough to find my most worth while meaning.
The most wonderous beauty in all the lands.
And I need you to know, that this beauty, I found, was you!
I pray.
I pray everyday!

this one i wrote for my daughter for whom i gave up for adoption... she turned one this year on nov. 4th

Hptitan213 · 12-22-2006, 03:31 AM

Dude that was beautiful, i cant imagen it.

ptpotsmkrondaDL · 12-23-2006, 08:13 AM

thank you... i try to get detail in to my peoms best i can .. i guess my type of poetry isnt really top prioity on here.. prollly wont post much more but ty!

-e4 · 12-23-2006, 10:39 AM

WOW! you really got some talent and that shit was from the heart, yo!
but seriously i really liked it and you should give youself a pat on the back!
peace

Perplexed Pixie · 12-24-2006, 03:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ptpotsmkrondaDL

thank you... i try to get detail in to my peoms best i can .. i guess my type of poetry isnt really top prioity on here.. prollly wont post much more but ty!

I like your poetry, keep posting it. I know I have just been pretty buzy to reply to alot of threads.

Sorry Im a skacker

ptpotsmkrondaDL · 12-24-2006, 11:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pothead4sure

I like your poetry, keep posting it. I know I have just been pretty buzy to reply to alot of threads.

Sorry Im a skacker

nota slacker ... just one of the important ppl now

too good to reply to my SAPPY writings lol...jk jk

FatalAttraction · 12-25-2006, 04:07 PM

That's so adorable. I don't necessarily like the somewhat religious concept in it, but it's still really well written and you can see it truely comes from the heart. Good job.

ptpotsmkrondaDL · 12-25-2006, 11:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by FatalAttraction

That's so adorable. I don't necessarily like the somewhat religious concept in it, but it's still really well written and you can see it truely comes from the heart. Good job.

yea the religious part is for her adoptive parents they are extemly religious... ty

12-21-2006, 05:32 AM	#1
ptpotsmkrondaDL New Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 28 Grams: 878.30 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Pray...(poem) I never can tell, what tomorrow will bring. Yet, I still awake each day to face life's fate. Always dreaming of what it'd be like if I took another way. Forever looking back, to the hardest choice, the one worst day. Although I know that you're OK, I pray. Everyday I pray. I try not to look back, at all of my mistakes. I look back at you, and see nothing I choose was a mistake! You're almost one now, My Beloved Angel Child. I look for items to buy you, to remind you of your beauty. I found nothing, nothing even half your beauty. And I prayed. Everyday I prayed. Then my words, once again, started flowing. "Pictures are worth a thousand words," You, My Love, are worth so many more! My Dear, I fear, theres nowhere near enough words, To interprate your worth, and meaning to myself, or your Mother or Father. And I pray, Everyday I pray. For fair warning, there is not enough time, within this life, to see all beauty. To appreciate in each dark sorrow, there is a light. I was lucky enough to find my most worth while meaning. The most wonderous beauty in all the lands. And I need you to know, that this beauty, I found, was you! I pray. I pray everyday! this one i wrote for my daughter for whom i gave up for adoption... she turned one this year on nov. 4th

12-23-2006, 10:39 AM	#4
-e4 Jr. Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 174 Grams: 1,272.25 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	WOW! you really got some talent and that shit was from the heart, yo! but seriously i really liked it and you should give youself a pat on the back! peace __________________ Strangers have the best candy

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Hptitan213 New Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 4 Grams: 576.10 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Dude that was beautiful, i cant imagen it.

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ptpotsmkrondaDL New Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 28 Grams: 878.30 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	thank you... i try to get detail in to my peoms best i can .. i guess my type of poetry isnt really top prioity on here.. prollly wont post much more but ty!

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FatalAttraction New Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 36 Grams: 576.00 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	That's so adorable. I don't necessarily like the somewhat religious concept in it, but it's still really well written and you can see it truely comes from the heart. Good job.

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